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Mustard Fields

Fields paint yellow sea A flood of mustard flowers Our chocolate hours Miles and miles in smile Of Van Gogh painting freedom Hours we spent handsome The sky smiles like you Blue above and yellow here Come, let's clink our beer ________________________________ 20/12/2016

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Date: 1/2/2017 8:08:00 AM
"Our chocolate hours" is a very good line. I was drawn to this poem as we get fields of mustard fields here in California. They are a weed. But the plant dominates...and does provide that yellow sea of which you speak.
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Date: 12/23/2016 3:43:00 PM
I agree w/Carole about the chocolate hours ... great line in a great poem, Probir. Sorry I haven't been around more regularly. I've been missing some good poetry. Love and peace to you.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 6:29:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/21/2016 10:22:00 PM
Lovely word picture and lovely "chocolate hours" spent smiling. I especially like this one, Probir. Carole
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/21/2016 11:11:00 PM
Very good ... Chocolate thanks then ... ! ...
Date: 12/20/2016 4:49:00 PM
Nice piece, 7 for this. I love the last line: 'come, let's clink our beer'...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/20/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thank you for enjoying ...
Date: 12/20/2016 10:10:00 AM
Cheers my friend:) just excellent haikus Probir:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/20/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thank you ... Glad you liked it ...
Date: 12/20/2016 5:56:00 AM
What a delight to read dear, Probir! A seven for each!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/20/2016 9:50:00 AM
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Date: 12/20/2016 2:18:00 AM
- Three beautiful gems, Probir - Merry Christmas to you and your family - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/20/2016 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Anne ... Merry Christmas to you and your family too ...
Date: 12/20/2016 2:18:00 AM
Great haikus...well done... A big 7...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/20/2016 5:31:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/20/2016 12:07:00 AM
Very handsome haikus indeed, Probir! You have a real knack for them my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/20/2016 12:51:00 AM
The Muse sometimes does a favour ... and the flavour arrives ... but not always ... thank you for liking ...
Date: 12/19/2016 11:26:00 PM
I will drink to that!! Nicely done.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 11:39:00 PM
Ha ha ... Thank you ...

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