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Whom is she The lucky girl To hold my heart But I lost I roam around in a see-less room In this heart, it is a vastness length Comb for whom she maybe But I lost I scour around in this mind of mine Think whom future girl maybe Must be prettiest I ever see But I lost Must be a swaying rose in space That butterfly glances number-ness times And wonder what she perhaps But I lost Whom is she The lucky girl To hold my heart But I lost Must be a kindest girl of time That understands situation of time In times of laughter and of cry But I lost Must be one of a type That my likes long to grasp For her kindness, love, and care But I lost Must be an angel from above Having a silvery crown on head And fluttering wings as hand But I lost Whom is she The lucky girl To hold my heart But I lost Must be whom I hope she be In this roam of vastness length For goodness is my want Must be A girl I love in all my heart That I care as though only girl on earth And sees me as only in her world Must be Whom is she The lucky girl To hold my heart But I lost

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Date: 6/14/2016 3:37:00 PM
Hello AM, A very heartfelt and quite passionate Lyric here my good friend. Keep writing and doing all of the creative things you're doing. Your talent is boundless!! Unfortunately, there is no real magic formula for finding that "perfect girl." Sometimes, when you're not looking at all, is when that special person appears before you. (That's precisely how I met my wife -- and we've been married 26 years now.) Keep Writing and Spill Ink. A "7" too!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:17:00 PM
AM, I hope you find your perfect girl in time, lovely poem, 7 ~
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Date: 6/8/2016 4:14:00 PM
Sorry that you lost..Creative work..Very expressive..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 6/8/2016 1:28:00 AM
well written....your lucky girl is siezed in your forever..I guess...you will never lose her..~blessed~..
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:36:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely lyrics. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Date: 6/7/2016 4:51:00 PM
Wonderful lyrics and yearning, Afolabi. I enjoyed your poem. Sandra
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Date: 6/7/2016 4:28:00 PM
We all search for that special someone to come and make us whole. The truth is that no one can be totally responsible for making someone else happy. Happiness is a decision we make. Once we have learned to be whole and complete within our own right by ourselves then we can have a true relationship with another person. This is a lovely write with great feeling and sentiment. A seven from me. Bravo my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/7/2016 4:17:00 PM
The more romantic one is, the more enjoys a relationship and the more one suffers! This is the lot of a tender heart. We all have been through that dear, Afolabi! We always dream of something better and if we keep dreaming it will come! Very sentimental writing!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/12/2016 12:15:00 PM
thank you for your warm comment sir, your words are of truth. bless you.
Date: 6/7/2016 12:47:00 PM
Well - I know the feeling. Touching poem - glad you liked my latest Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/12/2016 12:07:00 PM
thanks for dropping by.
Date: 6/7/2016 11:47:00 AM
- Sounds lovely .... a great poem, Afolabi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/7/2016 4:30:00 PM
Thanks I appreciate you lovely support.
Date: 6/4/2016 5:57:00 PM
Interesting work..Lucky for sure is the girl, lady, or woman who is truly loved..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/7/2016 4:27:00 PM
Thanks for visiting me friend, I appreciate your comment......A.M.

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