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Mournful Cry

Mournful warning cry travels across the cold sea.... quick, look out, watch close From within the fog beacon of life in the night.... guide to safe harbor
Paula Swanson For the contest: In The Light Haiku Sponsored by Russell Stivey Placement:2nd

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Date: 9/13/2011 11:47:00 AM
CONGRATS PAULA ON A SPLENDID SECOND PLACE WIN WITH THIS RARE BEAUTY LUV..
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Date: 9/12/2011 6:28:00 PM
congrats Paula, so well done. BG
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Date: 9/12/2011 4:17:00 PM
Seeing that "beacon of life" on a foggy day or night saves lives, Paula. Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Russell's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Russell's "In the Light of Haiku"contest Paula. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:00:00 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest "In the Light of Haiku"!!
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Date: 9/9/2011 2:49:00 PM
Nice Haiku and good luck in the contest. love phyl
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