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Mother's Day's Daze

. ‘pon mine lips warmth past mine lips life mother’s breast mine force

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2015 11:58:00 PM

gosh here is one I missed. You were enjoying breasts since the very beginning! heehee. (you can keep ranting about Soup. I understand!)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/7/2015 6:45:00 PM

I am so fortunate to still have my mom. A brief and precise poem my friend. love phyl

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/24/2015 5:37:00 AM

A mother's affection can easily become a great force in our lives from years to come. I love the physicality of your poetry, that easily passes into more ethereal and spiritual for certain imaginations. Love you James! Hope all's well! Always, Laura

Constance La France

Date: 5/13/2015 7:15:00 AM

James, beauty in a few words, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Jacqueline, my mother, I could not go to the cemetery to visit her on mothers day because I was working and it is very far away but I wanted to write a poem to remember her, that was not full of sadness

James Peranteau
Date: 5/13/2015 7:40:00 AM

I'll tell you Constance, we are fellows, and your write was suffice with regard mother.The essence of your mother will forever be an embodied force about you and will materialize no mater where you are dear poet friend of mine ! Many blessings to you Constance, and I thank you kindly for taking time to review mine writes ......much love, james

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/10/2015 2:45:00 PM

simply engaging in such a few words, james..how have you been?..happy mother's day!... greeat one!.. huggs

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 5/10/2015 1:14:00 PM

Brief and sincere....... I like it!