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Morning Sunshine

Soft through the window The light greets my sleepy eyes Thoughts lazily float Anticipating the day And the sweet warmth of sunshine Written 10/15/12

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Joseph May

Date: 10/31/2012 4:50:00 PM

nice tanka ....congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2012 11:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/29/2012 8:32:00 PM

Barbara..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/29/2012 3:06:00 PM

so divine, barbara.. congrats with huggs!..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2012 2:56:00 PM

sweet, and lazy thoughts are a good thing! awesome, Barbara and congrats for your win.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/29/2012 12:48:00 PM

Nicely done Barbara! Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/29/2012 11:13:00 AM

CONGRATS BG ON A FABULOUS WRITE AND WELL PENNED WIN LUV ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/29/2012 9:57:00 AM

Big congratulations on you win xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/29/2012 8:08:00 AM

Gentle dreamy write which fits the verse theme so well nice pivot to the last 2 lines also. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/29/2012 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 10/29/2012 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara for winning 1st Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/27/2012 6:10:00 PM

A lovely way to wake up. Beautiful, Barbara.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2012 5:58:00 PM

this beauty really deserves to be on the winners' list and I expect to see it there!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/27/2012 5:22:00 PM

A lovely tanka. If for the sunshine contest, it should do well. My favorite time is when dawn rises.

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/25/2012 3:24:00 PM

Have a wonderfully warm sunshiny day. :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/19/2012 8:26:00 AM

I lvoe that moment in bed when I am fully awake, but just thinking about the day. Great tanka.

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 10/16/2012 9:29:00 AM

A captured moment one may treasure...Enjoyed reading....

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/16/2012 6:47:00 AM

This is a perfect example of a morning sunshine! After I read this write I wanted a ray of sunshine to come through the window and beam me some great warmth that it can bring! I often wake up to the sunshine coming through the window...except when the daylight comes later in the day, then I must wait for the great sunshine! I really enjoyed this wondrous poem Barbara! You've done masterful with this elaborate piece, Great Work!!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/16/2012 1:50:00 AM

Lovely tanka Barbara.Feeling the warmth.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/15/2012 11:01:00 PM

Sweet and warm.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/15/2012 8:56:00 PM

Wonderful feel to this lovely poem. love phyl