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Morning of May

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Morning of May


Morning of May,
she shines bright,
the winds play
'mid roses white.

The light kisses
her splendor fair,
while she misses,
hope in despair.    08

Adored shall pace,
sky aisles gray,
romantic lace,
lightless  bouquet;

Gracious valor,
splendid twinkles
embraced calor,
of clouds sprinkles.    16

Soft wind traces
a marble quarry
and there embraces
her proud glory.

The wraiths ascend
float upwards high;
and flowers blend,
and dreams die.    24

© 05.29.2012
© 07.30.2013

entering the contest 
"Try A Trickle Down Free Verse" 
sponsored by Rick Parish.

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  1. Date: 12/13/2013 5:08:00 AM
    I love this one too... but what is calor, Giorgio?

    phookan Avatar gautami phookan
    Date: 12/13/2013 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh, that!
    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/13/2013 5:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    calor = body heat, warmth (Latin origin)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:02:00 PM
    Hi Giorgio, I'm back commenting on the soup. , Congratulations on 'The Trickle Down Free Versenice" contest. I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * LINDA

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/13/2013 5:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Linda! It is nice to see you back! :)
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 12:49:00 PM
    this kind of poetic style that you did is what i adore , G.. congrats all the way!..;) huggs... big thanks for including my " in the mood" piece in your recent contest... huggs

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/6/2013 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you nette! :) G.
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:49:00 AM
    A tremendous winning poem... Congratulations on the win.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/6/2013 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol. :) G.
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:04:00 PM
    Lovely write Giorgio. The rhythm is perfect, and again, so many great images. Congrats!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/2/2013 3:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Juliet! G.
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 2:13:00 PM
    Wow Giorgio, I don't know how you could write a better poem. Congrats on your win...Roger

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/2/2013 3:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Roger.
  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:01:00 AM
    hello G, deep. I read your bottom note. I kind of felt a little free verse in this poem. gracious words....linda

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/2/2013 3:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Linda, thank you!
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 1:26:00 PM
    This is a great poem for the contest. Thanks for sharing and reading my poem.... Lucilla

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/2/2013 3:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lucilla thank you!.
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 1:18:00 AM
    It really is too bad that he says to use only free verse. When I did my own entry, I remember really wanting to rhyme many of my lines and feeling horrible to have to "hold back." No matter, you have created a GEM with this poem. May is one of the best months of the entire year!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/2/2013 3:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea.
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 2:45:00 PM
    I so enjoy your imagery, the King can trickle down any way he wants!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 8/1/2013 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you!
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 11:26:00 AM
    Hi Giorgio great entry for the contest good luck, all the best Poetowen

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 8/1/2013 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Owen. I ma glad you are back. 2 thumbs up.
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 12:42:00 PM
    You picked my favourite month..Of course its May and its my birthday month..1st May(workers day)on my island..so at least that day We rest : ) This poem rhymes beautifully and flows softly..A whisper in calm beauty. The ending'and flowers bkend/and dreams die-evokes stirring emotions.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 7/31/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you CC. Very well said! G.
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 12:22:00 PM
    This is good for the contest. good luck. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 7/31/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you LC! Good luck to you, too!