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Morning Mist

The mist rolls in like a mythical creature It rolls and winds itself around, clinging, like a choking vine clings to life. It rides in softly, white, transparent, Yet visible to the naked eye. It creeps, it encases everything Nothing, is left untouched in it's wake. Visual one moment and the next gone. 10/30/12

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Date: 1/21/2013 4:10:00 PM
Nice poem Phyllis; We have been having those mist days here lately. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 1/16/2013 8:24:00 PM
Love it,,, it's been freezing at night and foggy in the AM's here in calif. Have a great day Phyllis ;}
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Date: 11/5/2012 2:14:00 PM
Let everything that hath breath praise the Lord. It was about noises. The rocks crying out.
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Date: 11/1/2012 5:26:00 AM
a collage of tender pictures that gently enchants me, phy.. sweet morning to you!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/31/2012 3:21:00 PM
wonderful poem, you paint a awesome scene with your pen...
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Date: 10/31/2012 3:05:00 PM
Love your verse Phyllis, , stopping by to wish you a Happy Halloween ;-).~hugs xox hugs~ Please have a happy, fun and safe Halloween. Trick or treat~ Love:-) PD
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Date: 10/31/2012 2:59:00 PM
outstanding one from you, Phyllis. REally lovely!
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Date: 10/31/2012 11:58:00 AM
SO ELEGANT AND BEAUTIFUL PHYL WITH GREAT VISUAL ATMOSPHERE LUV .. DELICATE TAPESTRY OF POETIC WEAVING U PENNED .. GREAT BLOG TODAY TOO .. HOPE U WILL READ MINE .. STAY SAFE ..
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Date: 10/31/2012 11:40:00 AM
Very creative and descriptive of that mist and fog that can be present from time to time..How did you weather the storm?..Thanks for stopping by my work..Your presence is greatly appreciated..Sara
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Date: 10/30/2012 3:24:00 PM
Very true, love these expressive lines! :) Tanya
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:07:00 PM
Phyllis, I love it .... beautifully written - I wish every morning was like this - - oxox always / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 12:36:00 PM
Ghostly stuff, wonderful write, enjoyed, love elizabeth
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:30:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Phyllis. I really enjoyed reading these lines.
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