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See morning as she emerges 
from the east,
Setting the horizon on fire with 
her red cloak,
The dark night fading away in 
the west,
Fleeing from her rosy blaze…

Listen as the birds honour her 
with sweet voices,
While the flightless sound the 
trumpet to wake the half-dead,
She whispers, her gentle breath 
making the morning breeze,
Dreamers wakeup to dream 

Smell her unscented fragrance 
as she passes by
Rare a scent so pure;
Need not be blended, 
Nevertheless chimneys dilute.

At her touch everything comes 
Flowers smile,
Frost lifts,
A new day breaks.

She blesses her children with all 
One more chance to change,
Another chance to love,
Another day to live.

She grows sweeter by the days,
For he knows his days are 
He smiles on his last day,
For he understands, heaven is 

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  1. Date: 10/11/2013 3:57:00 PM
    Hi Litha, dropped by "Morning." One can only give criricism when critisism is deserved. On this piece there is none deserved my friend. Your sky lights up with God's own fire, all begins to awake. The birds do sing and the vegetation comes alive. This is a most beautiful morning and i would not criticise it. I would say well done my friend. May such a morning as yours break every day. Have a nice day. Catch you later. Your Friend....MIKE.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:09:00 PM
    Litha , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:25:00 PM
    I enjoyed your poem very much. Thanks for the good write.

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:24:00 PM
    I could use some critism, especially corrective.

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 10:34:00 PM
    Morning, and welcome to the soup, hope there will be others coming from you,Thanks for sharing .