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Moonlight Ballet

rides on carousels gently ticks of fairy hops technicolor dance... tiptoeing inside hushed sleep hazes of moonlight ballet Fantasy Contest of Skat ( tanka) by nette onclaud

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 9:35:00 PM

congrats Nedtte luv on another phenom first place win.. sooo smooth..luv..

Jon Arno

Date: 1/30/2012 2:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your great write :) Jon

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/30/2012 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations Nette on your win, lovely poem, best wishes Elizabeth

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/30/2012 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Nette.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement Nette. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 1/30/2012 5:34:00 AM

Amazing poetry by you Nette.Congrats on your 1st place win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/30/2012 3:03:00 AM

Congratulations nette (catching up after my week away so sorry if I'm late) x

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2011 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/4/2011 8:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Nette.

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/4/2011 3:56:00 AM

Congratulation on your win, my friend.bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/2/2011 9:13:00 AM

Wow Nette, you sure have outdone yourself this time! You know how to write a poem with a punch to it. Your descriptions sure bring about great visions to my mind and I enjoy them immensely! Awesome Work!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/2/2011 8:44:00 AM

Loved your write Nette. Good luck in the contest. love phyl

Tony Lane

Date: 12/2/2011 6:41:00 AM

Some of us hit delta very quickly and stay there for quite a long time. Makes for interesting nights.