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He hurts me mommie 
Can you help me 
Set me free 
From this pain

Where I don't wanna be
Let me fly with the angels 
Drift on clouds past the moon

I love you mommie 
But I don't want to stay 
And live in this pain everyday 

He hurts me mommie
Can you help me
Help me, pass away

6pm  Jan 4, 2013  Friday

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  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:52:00 PM
    A pain not of body but of soul complaining mommie how to become set free. It's philosophical too. Wonderfully done. Loved always, bl

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/15/2013 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading bl ;}
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:37:00 PM
    If I were mommies then i'd say; don't let love treat you this way.make demands. Don't be afraid to love love emotionaly displayed. Bring him in line he'll understand. If he loves you he'll abide.

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 5:17:00 AM
    Very emotive and expressive work..This should never happen to a child..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Tears flowed, emotions conveyed. I hope this isn't a personal experience. Bless you from the bottom of my hart Deb. Friends Always, Connie

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 12:05:00 PM
    I sometimes wonder - could this also come from the womb? Good stuff. Thanks for reading my stuff. daver

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 4:56:00 PM
    great words here babe...and it strikes a the heart.. rain forests to the north of Australia are being destroyed New Guinea where it used to rain feet a year, Malaya, Borneo and all of Indonesia were well timbered....billions of trees gone for greed...mans insatiable greed... the acursed monkee walks and destroys..... queer weather here no drought last 4 years , climate change??? or the death of billions of tree souls....

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/19/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank ya Don ;}
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:12:00 AM
    The people who plea for this every day are counted in myriads! A tragedy disguised in blessing is seen, because of the writing, here. Wonderful writing!

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:41:00 PM
    Obscurely, the child suffers so. It's asking just to be let go. Mommie, it hurts more each day. Too much that I just can't stay. I love you mommie, I love you true. But I just don't know what I can do. May this just be a poem Debbie. Personally that is. But sadly, this reality lives with young and old alike. May God's grace be with you always. <3 :)

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 11:53:00 AM
    Hi Debbie really sad words hope they are just fiction, all the best Owen

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/7/2013 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading Owen ;}
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:00:00 AM
    It so sad and touching. And it is beautiful.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/7/2013 2:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Vesna ;}
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 5:34:00 PM
    wow... ur great. Is this published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Or enter another one of your poems... they all seem really fantastic and creative! Wish you the best with your poetry no matter what you decide!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/6/2013 9:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jacob ;}
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 3:37:00 PM
    this seems so tragic, as if it is a small child that has been kidnapped by a child abuser? It would be awful to have this happen to one of your kids.

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 4:47:00 AM
    Feeling the child grief and fear ..... very touching written Debbie. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 2:58:00 AM
    Harsh reality for some poor children! Could feel the distress! Great job

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 1:24:00 AM
    Amazing, touching work. Thanks for sharing Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:30:00 PM
    very unique and nice written poem.. so lovely and heartfelt..thank you for sharing dearest Debbie,,, have a bleesed day :) <3 SK

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/5/2013 11:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sukmawati ;}