Mirror, Mirror Hanging Inside

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with justice comes peace and family security

Their is a reflection within you blindsided that which has already decided one way or the other sometimes the truth has a relationship and love can never be divorced from it Why do you hold the cross incorrectly standing at the altar rails claiming to be religious Holy Innocence is found guilty within your court is their something behind those eyes lost beyond saving in that which tortures your freedom of choice and makes a slave out of life condemning a soul to death

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/26/2020 4:39:00 AM

Profound and holy writing my dearest friend, Liam. Blessings my brother!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/25/2020 3:43:00 PM

Hi Liam!:)) Excellent poem you've written ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:)Abortions disgusting. We're living in very ungodly, evil,corrupted,sad times Liam!But with our Lord Jesus we can have Love Hope Light Salvation!So lets pray more for all, especially all the blind,lost,very evil souls of this world!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A fav !You have a beautiful heart!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are OK in all, Liam.Remember that the Lords always with you!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/25/2020 3:42:00 PM

This feels so deep in thought Liam: sometimes the truth has a relationship and love can never be divorced from it..and..Holy Innocence is found guilty within your court..your poem looks into soul of humanity.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2020 3:22:00 PM

- Hi Liam, so nice to see you ... fake lips are abominable ... hands that pour innocent blood :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)