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Mine Heart Flags

What foolish thoughts doth my mind entertain That alloweth my heart to cling to hope? Perchance it be governed as how to cope: By banishing thinking that threatens pain? Nay, this canst not be truth; methinks again... Yet, even these new thoughts give cause to mope How couldst I believe they containeth scope? I knowest truly that they all be feign Still, I cling fast to the merest glimmer That fate beholds a hand I do not see And these dreams canst exist in a real world; That, instead of Hope's eyes getting dimmer My deepest wishes be'eth granted me And I wilt see my true purpose unfurled ~ Inspired by: Kristin Reynolds, Rockin the Renaissance Contest!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/4/2013 10:40:00 PM
Nigel, a nice rocking poem. a heart should never come to a fold. enjoyed this winning poem...LINDA
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Date: 2/16/2009 5:45:00 PM
This is beautiful, Nigel. So sorry I missed this before. Your sonnets are just lovely. Wonderful piece! Love, Robin
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Date: 12/24/2008 10:28:00 AM
You really blow me off with your sonnets. Fantastic! Congratulations on your well deserved success. Merry Christmas and a happy new year! Love, Chitra
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Date: 12/22/2008 6:59:00 AM
Nigel - Congrats on placing in Kristin"s contest - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/21/2008 2:56:00 PM
Such a wonderful Renaissance-style poem! I love lines 3-4 especially. Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest, and thank you again so much for your comments on my poetry! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/21/2008 10:54:00 AM
Dear Nigel - Congratulations on your WIN in Kristin's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 12/21/2008 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Nigel on this wonderful poem of unrequieted love. I hope those dreams come true for that broken hearted lover! :) Well deserved to be a winner in Kristin's contest! ~ Happy Holidays, enjoy an Italian Christmastime!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/21/2008 8:02:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Kristin's contest.Nigel.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words.Where in Italy are you ?
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Date: 12/21/2008 6:50:00 AM
Warmest congrats dear Nigel on your win in Kristin's contest! Your poetry is always amazing. Happy holidays sweet friend! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 11/19/2008 1:24:00 PM
Mine heart doth loveth your heart..and your poems..BG
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Date: 11/19/2008 10:21:00 AM
these words hit close to my heart. I love your style. very well penned. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
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Date: 11/19/2008 10:18:00 AM
Nigel you do have a way with these - wonderful poetry - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/19/2008 9:39:00 AM
Nigel I love this piece but I must say all the (th) had me smiling in the poem. You did a marvelous job with this piece. I look forward someday to attempt a sonnet, but for right now I will live with the beauty that exist with your wirtes. Hope all is well brother. Chris.
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