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Midas Touch

~Do Not Trust a Word, He Says~ He speaks of sunken treasures the way no other man The map of his essence is drawn in the stars His smile of gold ride out the waves The moon is pulled by the prestige of his masculine art With great pleasure, your heart now sits in a glass case His love lavishes making every moment memorable This gentleman cultivates you from every direction Your blood rises to his flirtatious ego His eyes, manipulate you, invade every dream, Endless lust, pulled by the enigma of dragon dust wind Falling flowers of forgetfulness, when lost in his touch He endures, he breathes in ways you can't resist Uttered words easily wrap around your heart In a game of trust, his lips persuade another kiss Like a syndrome, you babble and drool ---- stepping all over yourself You are naught more than a fool in love, Trusting and believing every golden word spoken from his lip ~I LOVE YOU~ ( A Poet Destroyer Collection)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/16/2016 8:37:00 PM
Wow..This is fantastic..like an anthem that should be sung loudly and proudly so others may not be tempted. The vibrancy of your words sets an amazing tone, this is excellent writing and a most pleasurable read. :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 5/22/2016 4:33:00 AM
I like the line" heart now sits in a glass case" As if its all for trophy of love.
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Date: 4/22/2016 5:17:00 PM
exhilarating! Hugs.
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Date: 4/10/2016 3:24:00 PM
Brilliant write. I enjoyed.........hugs
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:54:00 PM
a love so intoxicating.. beautiful :)
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Date: 2/13/2016 10:18:00 PM
Hi Linda, the real man needs not to use the art of seduction. Your write sings of such a seduction. Your words take us on such a journey as only you can. Words can sing into the heart so easily and yours do. You have your own style of simplistic truth in your writes. This is an excellent write and it is deserving of a seven and put into my faves. Love Vlad.
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Date: 12/25/2015 1:51:00 PM
Very well said and so true for many of us in the life we have been succumb to. Awesome poem and very well written..
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:35:00 PM
It's best to stay away from this guy, that's for sure. You explain in great detail why... he is a wolf in sheep's clothing, a drain on your psyche, and most likel your pocket book! Well done Linda!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 9/16/2015 10:45:00 PM
Dear Linda This sounds like something I would write to my blue eyes, love the texturing of loving you put here in this inspirational work of the human heart, great job sister poet, cheri
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Date: 9/2/2015 10:38:00 AM
Inspired me to write a poem called Sunken Treasures which follows these thoughts. Hope you like it. Need the inspiration to write. love phyl
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Date: 8/30/2015 1:16:00 PM
Beautiful captivating lines in this poem Linda. You always wow me with your poems. Loved it. love phyl
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Date: 8/25/2015 3:22:00 PM
but i trust evry word you have got in this ..loved it PD
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Date: 8/21/2015 5:02:00 PM
Hi Linda Love this... it reminds me of the seduction that certain men perfect as we fall prey to their words and innuendo's. I believe we reside in the same State of TX now. Just recently relocated to Dallas from South Africa ~~x~~
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Date: 8/21/2015 3:28:00 PM
It may be about the "midas touch", but it reads like hot buttered rum over velvity smores...You have poured a juicy bit of imagery onto your page...it's magic.
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Date: 8/21/2015 12:05:00 AM
Hey, PD. you should be putting up some of these collaborations you are doing with poets. You are going to have so many of them after your contest!! What about the one I just saw with Nathan or something. It was really good. Anyway, just here to say hi!!
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Date: 8/20/2015 8:06:00 PM
Linda, so beautifully penned, you have such an incredible talent, a7 and thanks for all your visits to my poetry and comments ~~
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Date: 8/19/2015 4:43:00 PM
Your thoughts here are deep and make me want to go sea diving. Nice write.
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Date: 8/16/2015 12:21:00 PM
Wishing you love and best wishes dear friend....Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 8/15/2015 2:25:00 PM
I'm already falling for the guy you've written about. Sincerely, I'm imagining a Greek God out here.
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Date: 8/14/2015 9:51:00 AM
PD BEEN AWHILE.... JIMMY ANDERSON AKA POETICWARLOCK.. MISS OUR SLAMS! HEHEHEH
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Date: 8/12/2015 10:08:00 AM
Linda, wow, what a deep and sadly true write, you have penned some beautiful lines A7 and thanks for placement in any poem 32 appreciate
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Date: 8/12/2015 3:59:00 AM
True as midas touch,golden with every word...great write
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Date: 8/11/2015 4:10:00 PM
Great work with the magic Midas touch of a free soaring poetic heart that understands the pains of life and love. Emile.
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Date: 8/11/2015 3:58:00 PM
We've probably all fallen for those three words! Very nice - I could relate
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Date: 8/9/2015 4:00:00 PM
You write with such rare skill and mastery of phraseology...7+!
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