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Metal to Metal Bliss

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Metal to Metal Bliss

Our lips caught together like thistles in sweet surrender, and though our kiss was immersed by the sun, and riddled with foxtails, we were captured in the bliss of bare feet and blue jeans Kiss Contest: ______________________________

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  1. Date: 8/23/2012 6:19:00 PM
    ohhhhhhh loverly!! what were those sticker prickery things which used to cling to all our brown and kinda looking like a horned beetle? Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 1:07:00 AM
    I love the way you have woven this in with the reference to nature and concluding with the freedom of bare feet and blue jeans. Congratulations on your win, Carrie. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 1:05:00 PM
    A beautiful first kiss. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 6:48:00 AM
    Wonderful Carrie. Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on your another win Carrie xx

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:00:00 AM
    Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:30:00 PM
    So sweet, Carrie! Congrats on your win. Blessings, rhonda

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:04:00 AM
    Carrie congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 8:25:00 AM
    congrats Carrie on another lovely win for this truly great entry.. braces can be fun sometimes.. always a conversation piecve especially when kisses are involved...

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:30:00 AM
    It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Carrie. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:14:00 PM
    Lovely romantic Sijo here Carrie.Best wishes.