Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Metal Demons

Radeka Roum Avatar    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Metal Demons which was written by poet Radeka Roum. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Radeka Roum

Best Radeka Roum Poems

+ Fav Poet

Metal Demons

Metal demons haunt me so.
Towards my skin, their lust doth grow
When violaceous ribbons line the sky,
With saline crystals up so high,
Their voices at night do I hear,
Sweetly caressing my worthless ears.

Metal demons haunt me so,
Invading my thoughts, to and fro.
When the violet hour has come for me,
Echoing the words of a deep red sea,
Pulling my heart into an endless abyss,
They promise me that euphoric bliss.

Metal demons haunt me so.
With a shadowy complexion and metallic glow, 
With obsidian eyes and a silver tongue
On its cold hard edge my heart is strung.
Kissing away all the tears and pain,
They numb my arm with every stain.

Metal demons haunt me so,
Demanding a nick or a crimson flow.
A line across my alabaster skin,
Establishing a bond of blood and kin,
Drowning my sorrows in a sanguine pool,
These hellish beasts begin their rule.

Metal demons haunt me so.
Taking control of all I know.
Reality melts into an old familiar sting
For darkness has taken me under its wing.
My soul has finally floated away
My body’s prepped for them all to play.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 2:44:00 AM
    Radeka a big welcome to the soup, this piec eis very interesting...David

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 6:47:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Radeka. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:30:00 PM
    Welcome! I like that capsized world that is reflecting through the pronation of beauty and the glower moment. I've loved it. Write on.

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 12:27:00 PM
    Welcome you to the P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - You poem is good - well written. - Wish you luck. - Give comments and get comments. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 10:12:00 AM
    Very good poem. You probably didn't intend "Metal Demons" to be a metaphor for hard metal music. But that's how I read it and loved it as such.