Memories

Ash white smoke curls softly From the cut-stone chimney Where a portrait of simplicity Sleeps eternally in my mind. ======================================== from the poem "Firewood" written October 29, 1978 Entry: "Liberum Divisa 5" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory Richard Barden May 5, 2021 (3)

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Lin Lane

Date: 12/10/2021 6:53:00 AM

I see quite easily why these lines were honored in Greg's contest. Congratulations, Andy. I've recently returned to the Soup, and am enjoying reading you.

Andy Chunn
Date: 12/15/2021 9:11:00 PM

Well, right back at you. Still laughing about Santa. Glad you are here with us.

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 5/27/2021 8:31:00 PM

This is gorgeous. Congratulations on your win, Andy. God bless. Carol Louise

John Hamilton

Date: 5/27/2021 8:55:00 AM

Very nice imagery Andy, congrats on your win!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/26/2021 8:04:00 PM

This is so lovely, Andy - 'portrait of simplicity' is so evocative, many congratulations on your placement~

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/25/2021 8:52:00 PM

That's a beautiful way to describe memories, Andy, congratulations on your win:)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 5/25/2021 4:41:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your win in the Liberum Divisa 5 Poetry Contest, Andy - thank you so much for entering! This was a very tough contest to judge as there were SO many wonderful entries - I loved reading your submission. Blessings! - the bard

Andy Chunn
Date: 5/30/2021 1:29:00 PM

Thank you for the kinds words and for the effort of offering the contest. I am enjoying reading your work as well.