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Medley of Ku

she wants to dance quietly she waits will anyone ask her young man sees her heart jumps in his chest will he find his courage so beautiful she seems beyond reach is her beauty a curse up from his chair walks across the room will he find the right words more boy than man she sees him approach is he a good dancer a nervous smile twinkly blue eyes is that love in his eyes

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/17/2015 7:56:00 PM

what a charming string of Ku Richard - just checking out the correct form for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/17/2015 2:19:00 AM

Wow - I made it to your first page, but only because I have a secret mission. Anybody that went to a jr. high or high school dance can relate to this lovely poem. It captures that exact situation for me ... oh, young love ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2015 8:10:00 AM

Thanks Cay Cay, I used to love those dances.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/10/2015 12:26:00 AM

Two flew over the Ku Ku nest in love!!!! Loved this!

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/7/2015 1:03:00 PM

Hi! my lovely friend you have penned a nice mystery of melody ku. Beauty is not curse for good one surely. Brilliantly done. 7 sure. Loved always,bl

Neva Romaine

Date: 8/5/2015 3:37:00 PM

Hey Richard, stopped by for a visit and found this wonderful piece from you. I am unfamiliar with the form but I am so glad to get acquainted with it through this amazing poem! So beautiful in its expression. Be Blessed, Neva

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/5/2015 3:28:00 PM

is that love...oh yeah baby, what a dance, :)

Nathan D.

Date: 8/4/2015 3:25:00 PM

that's the cleverest way in showing off questionKU. Had no idea the form was real. I don't rate poems. But, this I will rate with a seven. NATE

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/4/2015 10:24:00 AM

Skirmishes of feelings that love provides, dear Richard! Beautifully done!

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/4/2015 8:06:00 AM

Lovely scene here, Rick! Brings back memories of youth! Those uncertainties... Many can relate to this...:-))) hugs!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2015 8:17:00 AM

Thanks Kim!;0)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/4/2015 12:29:00 AM

Yeah that is Richard! Lovely pen!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2015 7:34:00 AM

Thanks Upma. Hugs Richard.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/3/2015 5:51:00 PM

A very beautiful and sweet penned...lol!!!!................A.M.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2015 7:35:00 AM

Thanks A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/3/2015 11:40:00 AM

- So sweet and lovely poem, Richard ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2015 7:37:00 AM

Hugs back to you Anne Lise.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/3/2015 9:58:00 AM

Richard, I enjoyed reading your medley of ku! An interesting way to tell a story! Love, Kim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2015 7:37:00 AM

Thanks Kim, much appreciated.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/3/2015 9:46:00 AM

Lovely that you're writing in your own form. Blue eyes are dreamy....I'm sure she said yes!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2015 7:39:00 AM

It has been a while since I have written in my form. I'm pleased you like it.

Anu Nayak

Date: 8/3/2015 8:59:00 AM

Beautiful poem dear Richard Lamoureux...love is in bud stage....several questions will deginitely flock in! Love, Anulaxmi:-) P.S: i did visit your website...read the welcome note..got to know about you and family:-) Stay blessed :-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/3/2015 9:17:00 AM

Thanks for checking out my site. Take care.