Meaningless Drivel

Lyrical; critical- almost spiritual! Spheres of fears entangle Costly crossly motley Miracle Grows and goads the gamble Seeming dreaming- brain is bleeding While I smile, unprepared Cut the rut in grand proceeding As I'm breathing in the Air... *Another experimental piece. I would be curious to see how you interpret it :)

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/21/2013 5:50:00 PM

Chan This is a crazy and insane poem. Were you on some kind of crazy pills when you write this one. LOL HHHHMMM You don't need pills to be crazy. HEE HEE Hugs Thanks for the heartfelt comment on my Tainted and Used poem.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/22/2013 4:57:00 AM

I must have been high when I wrote this one because it's definitely different from my traditional style. It's doggerel, really; totally nonsensical, but I guess that was what I was aiming for at the time lol ;)