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Meadow's Robe

When meadow flaunts her robe of green and covers me in tender lace her perfumed view lights up onscreen. From mantle wrapped by pure citrine a peaceful view my breaths embrace, when meadow flaunts her robe of green. Cascading dewdrops quite serene, wheels gently to enshrine my face her perfumed view lights up onscreen. A nightingale takes wing, unseen to pipe last croons within this space, when meadow flaunts her robe of green. She glides around like myth's Celine oh beauty lit by skyline’s grace, her perfumed view, lights up onscreen! The newborn dawn will spread its beam lingering through mild slumber’s pace. When meadow flaunts her robe of green, her perfumed air drapes path’s onscreen. Juli- Michelle's Rhyme Battle: Round 4

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/6/2014 2:48:00 AM
Beautifully written! Congrats on your victory!!
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Date: 4/5/2014 5:32:00 PM
Fantastic and wonderful piece,Great write...Congrats on your win...Kudos to you,dear friend...
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Date: 4/4/2014 11:37:00 AM
Imagery and song combine to bring beauty to the front. highly rated:) // congrats on fine win. // paul
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Date: 4/3/2014 1:06:00 PM
awesome win...PD
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Date: 3/16/2014 5:42:00 AM
In this poem beauty poursin like througha m i s t y emerald curtain of green and dew d r i p p i n g.. This sets the mood to go picnicking somewhere. Hey nette! Awesome poem! huggs and lots of love....
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Date: 3/16/2014 5:49:00 AM
... and nette did you get my mail this time?!!
Date: 3/14/2014 5:57:00 PM
Hi nette: Thank you for your comment on "Mom". It was an old poem I entered for a contest and I just noticed a typo that I corrected.
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Date: 3/14/2014 9:25:00 AM
Hi nette: Beautiful metaphoric praise for the meadow! My compliments.
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Date: 3/14/2014 7:57:00 AM
Your vibrant imagery makes the meadow come alive. I can just see her twirling around and smell her lovely perfume of grass, dew and flowers.
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Date: 3/13/2014 8:48:00 AM
Beautifully written...the imagery is out of sight!!
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Date: 3/13/2014 8:26:00 AM
A symphony of expressions culminated in an eruption of unsurpassed beauty!
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:28:00 AM
I truly love your recurring lines you have within this awesome write my friend! And my favorite line has to be this one, "oh beauty lit by skyline's grace" what a brilliant gorgeous line! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, Great work!!
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Date: 3/12/2014 9:15:00 PM
I love to go on nature walk when the weather that is lets me and this is like a breath of spring put into words, thanks for the warmth vibes of the season to come, along with the hope it will be soon. cheri
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Date: 3/12/2014 8:15:00 PM
Another classic nette , I am in awe once more .
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Date: 3/12/2014 7:20:00 PM
A great one Nette,one that can only come from a talent like the queen of poetry herself,kudos.Thanks for your concern for my next piece.I'm just thinking may be I should suspend my activity in PS awhile.I think it sounds somehow to continue writing or participating in contest,when you would not be read at all let alone win simply because you are not a native speaker.It sounds funny to read people's blogs and discover how much they hate you.There is racism even in poetry, too bad.Thanks Nette.
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Date: 3/12/2014 4:47:00 PM
The imagery is like a painting on oil canvas dear Nette..So enchanting!!!
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