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Me, Myself and Ice

Only the cold crunching of the fresh snow bunching, and the tired leather boots as I take that first step Can be heard right here by no other frozen ear, for away I rushed off to find silence instead And all that is harsh exists not on this marsh, where the only prying eyes belong to birds and deer The moment I did hesitate to glide along my skate, a winter wind whistled tugging my scarf forward Been years since I tried the child in me never died, and once you learn how you cannot ever forget And being scared of a fall takes the fun from it all, while on this solemn pond where all worries flee Staying sure on these feet when blade and ice meet, kept me on my toes as all went spinning around Until the colors of sunset made the trees silhouette, and brought back to me a world gone miles away Leaving not a solitary trace of my presence at this place, I untied those tight bindings and took in a deep breath A memory etched in my mind just the figures left behind, and if the sun erases them I can always come back.... (January 14th, 2020)

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Date: 1/26/2023 4:34:00 PM
I hope "the child in me never died" also. Congratulation on your placement in the contest. A beautiful expression of your recapturing moments from childhood.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/28/2023 5:15:00 PM
Thank you for your kind congrats and comments, Andy ... I appreciate it very much :)
Date: 1/25/2023 11:22:00 PM
Congrats on 3rd place in my contest! Excellent economy of words. Well deserved!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/27/2023 6:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Matt :)
Date: 1/9/2021 1:26:00 AM
Love the flow and rhyme here davidscottxx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/23/2023 4:59:00 PM
Thank you, David :)
Date: 3/7/2020 8:50:00 PM
You speak so compellingly of skating, but more than that, you have become a new creature, born with skates instead of feet. Like winter plumage they grow every year then depart when no longer needed, only to regrow when chill prompts their appearance. How many are there like you? The Hooded Winter Skate I'll call you. My wife said, you wrote about her, skating along on Lake Erie.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/24/2021 11:55:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment on my poem Mark... Please forgive my late reply. I haven't been spending a lot of time on Poetry Soup these days...
Date: 2/9/2020 1:13:00 PM
Kelly, What a nice picture you painted here. Sharpened your blades when you wrote this skate in nature's solitude 'where the only prying eyes belong to birds and deer'. Very nice to find this one. Happy Sunday. -Richard
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/7/2020 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Richard... Have a nice weekend :)
Date: 1/26/2020 4:56:00 PM
Wonderful poem and image of you skating around. Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/5/2020 9:22:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia ... hugs :)
Date: 1/26/2020 2:47:00 PM
I love how you looked within your mind when you wrote this one. A very good poem my friend. I really enjoyed this poem. your friend.......Roger
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/5/2020 9:05:00 PM
Thank you Roger :)
Date: 1/24/2020 10:10:00 AM
Wonderful write Kelly, I enjoyed the freedom of the moment spent with you through the read. It's true you can always come back!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/29/2020 5:27:00 PM
Thank you John :)
Date: 1/18/2020 1:43:00 PM
This is beautiful, Kelly, and I wish we had skating rinks here in Malta where the temperature never goes down enough to produce natural ones. Like swimming, or cycling, skating is certainly something which one never forgets. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/29/2020 5:19:00 PM
Thank you Paul :)
Date: 1/17/2020 3:57:00 PM
Great poem! I like the rhythm and the rhyme. The first two lines make me anxious for the next stanza. Well done.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/10/2020 6:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Timothy... I'm really glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Date: 1/16/2020 10:59:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Kelly,a fav. congratulations your win. Eve
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/10/2020 6:27:00 PM
Thanks so much for making this poem a favorite... I'm really glad you enjoyed it Eve :)
Date: 1/15/2020 5:29:00 PM
Hi Kelly I spent lots of years happily ice skating leaving behind daily life while spinning and jumping on the ice. I really resonated with this delightfully penned poem. Congratulations from one ice skater to another!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/9/2020 6:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Sam... I appreciate your kind comments on this poem... I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 1/15/2020 12:06:00 AM
I love this Kelly! I am putting it into my Faves. The spirit of freedom is so exquisitely felt in this lovely poem. xxoo
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/9/2020 5:45:00 PM
Thanks so much for making this poem a favorite... So glad you enjoyed it Connie :)

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