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Me In the Third Person

Strangest thought just entered my head What if I critiqued my own poems D'ya think I'd really be tough on myself Or would you detect a slight bias tone Using the criteria of accepted norms I'd be down at the bottom, no bones But for humorous verse and originality Call me Oliver Wendell Holmes First I followed time honoured patterns Of poets that have gone on before But that's not what makes a poet of note Originality is what raises his score So go ahead and break all the rules That have been in place forever Develop your style of creative writing And be proud of your endeavour (My apologies to Oliver Wendell Holmes!) © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 3/25/2013 10:45:00 AM
Yea, yea, Jack. Where there's a writing line to toe, I'm sure to "untoe" it. Originality rocks. I love your poetry, my friend :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/25/2013 11:10:00 AM
Hey DELYSious DELYSia! It's Quacker Jacks coming at you to fill you up with giggles and jiggles! You is a hoot my dear friend... thanks oodles! Love ya! Hugs, Jackers xox
Date: 3/22/2013 11:19:00 AM
Loved this advice, perfect poem. Jen
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/23/2013 7:24:00 PM
That is sweet my dear Jennifer... thanks a bunch! Please come by again... hugs, Jack xox
Date: 3/22/2013 10:42:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your very expressive and creative work..I think that you have the gift..I always enjoy reading your work..Sara
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Date: 3/23/2013 7:23:00 PM
WOW! Thanks a bunch my dear Sara! You can put your shoes under my desk any time! LOL Hugs, Jack xox
Date: 3/22/2013 8:23:00 AM
Does that mean I can be proud of my Troll poems? My dragon breaks the rules... Can I break the rules? UMMM... I think I already do... LOL I keep entering contests where I have trouble keeping my line count down... Whoa is me! Do I have to keep my line count down? My Trolls don't seem to want me to... What do you think Cathie? Could you tame my dragon for me?... Or solve my line count? Help me Obi-Wan Cathie!... I'm a b-a-d girl... LOL
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Date: 3/23/2013 7:22:00 PM
Why don't you try critiquing YOURSELF... now be objective! Hard eh? Line count... schmine count... who gives a poop! LOL Love ya! xoxox

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