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May I Have This Dance?

We looked at eachother Taking each step one at a time May I have this dance Take my hand And pull me close I remember the lights on us In the center of the dance floor You took off your mask And revealed the person within I lifted my hand And removed my mask There was a gasp And you leaned down I reached up And our lips locked That was the begining Of our lives together

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/9/2009 11:07:00 PM
loved this one, great story, great images. as always you amaze us! much love! madison
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Date: 5/7/2009 2:05:00 PM
Alexz, this is an amazing and wonderful love story. Congratulations. I have a featured poem this week. Ernilando
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Date: 3/19/2009 5:07:00 PM
Great poem! I really enjoyed this. Amazing!!! Cool, Rockin' poem!
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Date: 2/27/2009 12:25:00 AM
Alexz, this poem reminded me of "Romeo & Juliet," meeting on a dance floor wearing masks. It sounds like you met your one true love. Congratulations! Great work. Carolyn
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Date: 1/25/2009 8:00:00 PM
Lovely, Alexz. Your poem reminded me of my senior prom...thank God I was popular in High School...and not considered the school's dork-ass moron LOL!. Each verse in this poem is real, down-to-earth and honest. Your poetry is quite exceptional when you keep it tight and simple. I'm hosting a new Member contest - I think you should enter it - this poem warrants attention! Peace always, John
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Date: 1/13/2009 8:30:00 AM
wow...I've had a dance experience b4 too... it's amazing!
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Date: 1/7/2009 7:12:00 PM
whats up, you like cookies? new poem and come show some love.
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Date: 1/7/2009 10:17:00 AM
ummm, hey youre freaking me out, so, quit talking to me k?
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Date: 1/6/2009 5:46:00 PM
so whats up why are there no more folks in the chat room. are you guys upset at each other?
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Date: 1/6/2009 2:35:00 PM
this is nice. john
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Date: 1/6/2009 7:29:00 AM
GREAT JOB alex, this reads like a great story and like i said poets get better with the years and not the months. Enjoyed reading it and have a good day.
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Date: 1/5/2009 6:08:00 PM
Wowsers its HAPPY! lol. Laurie
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Date: 1/5/2009 2:38:00 PM
awww...that's so sweet..i like this one *Breana
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Date: 1/5/2009 1:32:00 PM
cute one Alexz ....Maryam
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Date: 1/5/2009 10:39:00 AM
Enjoy the magic....always, Christy
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