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Petty particle of Dust enters a cauldron Of light and a great star is born. Petty seeded gravel enters A shell and outcome is we are endowed with pearl. Mother butterfly lays eggs out pops caterpillar Makes a shell, it cracks, parts divide The caterpillar is now gone. As when the shell opens a butterfly comes out. A few drops of semen a child conceived and born eternity of life goes on. All the beginnings are petty The endings marvelous HIS all special Marvels. +++ October 11, 2014 Form : Rictameter Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place win Contest: The Monsters or Marvels by Debbie Guzzi

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Seren Roberts

Date: 10/18/2014 9:38:00 PM

Loved it Ram, congratulations .....Seren

Earl Schumacker

Date: 10/15/2014 6:30:00 AM

Hi Dr. Mehta, Very nice conceptual poem. Very well structured and an interesting read. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Earl

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/14/2014 9:27:00 PM

Back with my congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/14/2014 8:06:00 PM

Fantastic Dr. Ram, a most splendid poem and win.

Joseph May

Date: 10/14/2014 5:57:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Dr Ram

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/14/2014 3:13:00 PM

And your poem is a marvel.! A big congrats. BG

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/14/2014 2:57:00 PM

Dr. Ram, congratulations on high win for your lovely Marvels poem. Yes, your examples are miraculous marvels, and you expressed them so well. Sandra

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/14/2014 12:51:00 PM

This is lovely.....and I like that you prefer the marvels, rather than the monsters! Most went into the other direction, but your poem was pleasurable to read!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2014 11:21:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) hugs Janx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/13/2014 10:40:00 AM

a really uplifting beautifully painted piece ram excellent pen dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/13/2014 5:36:00 AM

Pearls of wisdom gathered with care and understanding! Superb, Dr. Ram and 3 times seven!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/12/2014 6:28:00 PM

All your rictameter stanzas are beautifully penned, Dr. Ram! All of Gods beautiful creations in nature. These are many of the marvels of this world that no man can ever create but Him. I love your rictameter suit! Good luck in the contest! :) love peace and light! xxxx D.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/12/2014 5:48:00 PM

Dear Dr. Ram, Most of us took the "monsters" route, so it is refreshing to read a poem of wisdom on the marvels of creation. Surely a winner, my friend. Well done! Love, carolyn

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/12/2014 11:27:00 AM

Unique take on the theme and a very insightful one it is. The greatest marvel man can ever know is God and God's love for mankind. I rate this a Super 7 my friend. Good luck in the contest..

Eve Roper

Date: 10/12/2014 10:03:00 AM

HIS all special Marvels. So well said :) eve

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/11/2014 11:16:00 AM

I marvel at the beauty here. Brilliant poem Dr. Mehta.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2014 11:12:00 AM

WOW - I'm in awe - totally unique take on the theme Dr Mehta:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx