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Below is the poem entitled Manhood which was written by poet Mar Star. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The most important woman in your life,
A mom who provides everything for you and your siblings,
Filling in for a man who left when you weren’t born,
As young child you were always wild,
You became the curious, smart, talented, handsome, sweetest child,
Trouble was your nickname,
As young adolescent finding yourself was your trial every day,
Questioning your manhood,
Wondering around town to find yourself in this maze,
Your adventurous and wild heart isn’t to blame,
You know you have a lot of growing up to make,
You look for love in the arms of a woman willing to give it all,
Go on where ever it may be and make it an adventurous trip.

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  1. Date: 6/6/2012 5:37:00 AM
    This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

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    Date: 6/6/2012 6:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You so much for taking your time in reading & leaving ur comment. I truly appreciate it.