Man and Heaven

Man, a ball that falls from heaven, bounces on earth and returns to heaven! © Demetrios Trifiatis 12 February 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2016 6:28:00 PM

I sure hope you are right on that one. But I fear some will defy gravity and not bounce back!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/15/2016 5:39:00 AM

My dear Andrea, since we are born we are going to die! Case closed! No exceptions here! haha!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/12/2016 10:55:00 PM

I take one look at your page, and I see so many monokus! Will be excited to read more --- this one has the rare element of being both whimsical and profound.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/15/2016 5:40:00 AM

You are right , dear Timothy, it is both as life is! Thank you!

Michael Tor

Date: 2/12/2016 7:37:00 PM

A true analogy of what happens to us, Demetrios. Stay well and Gods blessings my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/15/2016 5:42:00 AM

Thank you Michael, my friend, God bless you!

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/12/2016 9:14:00 AM

A great reflection from earth to heaven, my lovely friend,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/12/2016 2:04:00 PM

Yes, dear BL! A great one! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2016 6:58:00 AM

- Hmmm ..... deep ..... give me a picture of God's angels ..... (maybe too deep for "little me" :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/12/2016 8:29:00 AM

You are not little at all, dearest Anne-Lise! Your poems are your best witnesses! Thank you so much! hugs!

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/12/2016 5:10:00 AM

A very unique and interesting metaphor, sire. I'm glad he bounces! Kind regards...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/12/2016 5:39:00 AM

Wonderful to see you again, dear Kim! Thank you for your lovely comment! Have a marvelous weekend!