Man and Freedom

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MAN AND FREEDOM

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 20 NOVEMBER 2016, MY PICTURE, (c)

Man prides himself of his freedom yet unwittingly to the unyielding destiny succumbs! © Demetrios Trifiatis 20 November 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2016 9:04:00 PM

very profound. I love this one. and I enjoyed your Trump observation. The world has gone truly mad.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2016 12:09:00 PM

- The fate is in our own hands ~ freedom is not for everyone ~ Any person who has freedom are lucky :) - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2016 6:31:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, thank you so much for your delightful visit and comment! Hugs!

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/20/2016 4:52:00 AM

That is why he is man ... challenging the chains for freedom ... when he can no more stand as erect as your yellow rose and all petals of freedom take leave, he says it destiny ... however, your journey in the monoku is absolutely a selfie ... self-chosen destiny ... so happy ....

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2016 6:40:00 PM

I wonder at what age Man takes charge of his destiny? Really, till that moment comes is he free? I always love your pertinent comments dear friend, Probir! Thank you!