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Make Me Your Mistress

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Let me be your mistress the one who warms your bed who knows of each desire that to seduction's wed Let me be your mistress hidden from prying eyes Kept locked in heart's harem each night in different guise Let me be your mistress indulgent of your dream I'll feed you honeyed breasts desserts of richest cream Let me be your mistress Lie back on cushions plush let me undress your cares Be free to feel this rush Let me be your mistress in scented room, I'll dance I'll write and undulate Put you in craven trance Let me be your mistress I'll tease until I please the secrets that you hide I'll satiate with ease Let me be your mistress I live to make you feel your wildest urges rage in me becoming real Let me be your mistress my lips and hands obey Give them your sweet command watch colors burst from grey Let me be your mistress Your mistress, nothing more I want to feast on you Come taste all that's in store Make me....your Mistress Eileen

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Kathleen Kroll

Date: 3/6/2016 11:32:00 AM

Love the freedom you show to indulge your (our) fantasies. The art work supplements the poem so beautifully.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/6/2016 11:37:00 AM

Thank you, Kathleen. I appreciate your lovely visit. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2015 12:55:00 PM

Role playing and rich imagination combine to set the ball rolling; teasing and seduction attain what is expected of them. Appassionata rules:) hugs // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 4:20:00 PM

You are not the only one with limited views, Eileen. Soup is on a go slow at the moment! By the way...love your visuals! Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/23/2015 12:58:00 PM

Thank you, my dear.....I'm glad you liked this. My poems of late don't seem to be getting many views. I'm glad that my loved ones are here to enjoy my poetry. Hugs to you.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 10/22/2015 1:56:00 PM

Wow. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Great job -JT

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2015 8:56:00 PM

:) I'm so glad you did, dear. Hugs

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/21/2015 7:29:00 PM

"Let me be your Mistress, my lips and hands obey, give them your sweet command, watch colors burst from grey..." You are the genesis of sexual fantasy my Beloved Poetess...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2015 3:34:00 AM

Justin, thank you for the visit to this piece. I was hoping you would pass by. I love your poems because of the raw passion in the lines. Fifty Shades of Grey is alluded to in the line that you quoted. I'm very glad that you liked it, Justin. I await a new poem from you, dear.

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/21/2015 6:50:00 PM

Ahhh Pope, my fave poet, You are quite the temptress my little Desert Orchid, are yiou sure you have the energy lol. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2015 3:36:00 AM

Oh? It is good to know who your favorite poet is, Mr Seal. Yes, I like the role of temptress and seductress. I wrote a collaboration poem with Paul Callus on that theme. Here I'm going solo. We always have energy for the things we enjoy, Mr Seal. Have a good dear.... :)

Edlynn Nau

Date: 10/20/2015 12:44:00 PM

Excellent! You told the story, showed the passion, described the goal, and did all with elegant simplicity which nature knows well. The work here is evident! You made it look easy but we know the time and care spent here. Wonderful (a 7).

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2015 3:51:00 AM

That last sentence of your post on my Mistress poem is a very good one to share with my class. Thank you. I'm glad it looks effortless, but as you mentioned, it does take hard work. Thank you for visiting. I appreciate it.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/20/2015 8:37:00 AM

You are definitely not losing your touch Eileen, your ooh la la hotness is in full force!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2015 3:31:00 AM

Thank you for your visit to my Mistress poem. I really loved writing this piece. I'm glad that you liked it, Richard. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/20/2015 7:57:00 AM

How could anyone refuse such a plea when he knows the 1001 nights will pale in comparison with a night passed with you, dear Eileen! Phantasmagoric writing that enslaves the heart! A seven for each verse!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2015 3:37:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely and encouraging post to my mistress poem, dear poet. I'm so touched by your words of affirmation. To enslave the heart is the possess true power. I will be by to visit you soon. I have not been in the best frame of mind of late. Hugs

Michael Tor

Date: 10/19/2015 10:50:00 PM

Eileen your sensual side is alive on this steamy write. Well done.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2015 10:54:00 PM

My sensual is the lense on all things, Michael. I've fought hard to be able to express myself the way I like....fought customs, traditions, and misconceptions. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/19/2015 4:32:00 PM

Your back in the saddle again with your fantastic romantic writes girl. Great write.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2015 10:26:00 PM

Thanks, my sweet Eve. I surely love the ride. ;) Hugs, dear one.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2015 2:45:00 PM

- I absolutely adore this romantic poems, dear Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2015 10:25:00 PM

Sunshine...it's an honor for me. Thanks ever so much for the kind comment. Hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 10/19/2015 2:29:00 PM

Passion, passion, passion.....ouch !!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2015 10:22:00 PM

Yes....it is the fabric of soul. Thank you for the visit, dear. Hugs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/19/2015 1:51:00 PM

I love this poem Eileen. . Its hot.... : )

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2015 1:55:00 PM

Thank you, dear. ;) Had a hot afternoon! Second honeymoon is still...sweet. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 10/19/2015 1:35:00 PM

WOW! You will have the fella's queuing up Eileen - such stunning sensual imagery - I love it!!! hugs Jan xx 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2015 1:45:00 PM

:) Thanks, Sweetie....I'm naughty. If husbands treated their wives as though they were mistresses.....there would be a lot more fun in the bedroom, wouldn't there?! A little role playing never hurt anyone. Hugs, dear.