Make a Wish

Let me touch and rub you, Will you grant my command? As I bask in you, do what you must do You please me and make whole My wish is to always let you fill my soul. July 11, 2016 :For the Make a Wish Poetry Contest if Kim Merryman Tenth Place

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Lu Loo

Date: 7/18/2016 10:31:00 AM

Alexis, very congrats on your placement, this is wonderful! So beautiful...:)-luloo

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/18/2016 10:35:00 AM

Hi Luloo, Thank you very much. I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me: -) Alexis

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/16/2016 10:49:00 AM

Congrats! my friend...well done...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2016 9:57:00 AM

ooh la la. I LIKES this wish a LOT. BIG congrats in the contest, Alexis.

Jesse Day

Date: 7/15/2016 11:22:00 PM

Congrats on your 10th place win in the Make a Wish contest - A very romantic wish to share! - Jesse

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/15/2016 9:39:00 PM

Alexis, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating!

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/16/2016 1:44:00 PM

Kim, Thank you so much.It was pleasure to participate in your contest:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/13/2016 10:24:00 AM

Who wouldn't love to grant such a wish to a dear soul like you dear, Alexis? Tenderly romantic. Good luck!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/11/2016 2:56:00 PM

Wonderful write, Alexis, good luck in the contest. I would love one of those wishes. Hugs Eve

Phillip Garcia

Date: 7/11/2016 11:55:00 AM

Aside from making me blush it's an excellent write. Cool take on the contest. Very original idea