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Maids of Rain

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This write is a poetic expansion of an older poem that was called "Weaves".

(Iambic tetrameter)

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Maids of Rain

The buds were colorful like flames;
in blooming field while her advent
down pouring was, and flow in veins.

Unspoken were on distant sky;
(the maids' descent - rainfall god-sent) ,
splendid on fields, pure drops fell spry;

The clouds in solitude advanced
while raindrops formed air-hung new tropes
enduring bold color-enhanced
dew-scintillate the ferns on slopes.

On thrumming feast they jump and smile
the drops upon the road that shines
the orange trees in lines compile
dawn's maidens dance and weave designs.

Maids' ardent symphony of calls
from within rainfall's calm cadence
- they gallivant in heavens' Halls
Ideal forms on pristine dance.

The raindrops I transform to song,
sweet melody fates play - the leaves,
entreaty are that strings along
my blooming solitude they weave.

© 11-09-2012
© 05-16-2013

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  1. Date: 7/3/2013 10:50:00 PM
    Giorgio, :-( thank you for everything, you're precious in every way, I am happy you are a part of the soup, and I can call you a friend. your words of comfort meant a lot Love~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:05:00 AM
    your poem had me enraptured sooo beautiful and the flow perfection. I will rereading this many times ty for the inspiration super pen

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:53:00 PM
    Hi G... the poem is beautiful, and i love the proud look she weaves. transforming her raindrops into a song. now that line carried me into your arms. I am very charmed by the poem... you have given beautiful depth to the perfect raindrops... Love~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 3:21:00 AM
    One commenter used the term 'classical' to describe this poem. I whole heartedly agree. A stunning work of art

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 2:47:00 AM
    Beautyful and perfect rhymes. No technicality is perceived when reading, only a sense of sweet atmosphere which only poetry can create.

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 7:45:00 PM
    Hello Giorgio, I'm only stopping by to say hello. I haven't been able to comment much these past few days. I've been having massive headaches, that come and go. I will be back tomorrow to read more of your poems. always~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 12:38:00 PM
    - Giorgio, this is really a wonderful poem .... well done!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Well done!

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 6:51:00 AM
    Very creative use of an idea..Enjoyed reading about the glorious rain that keeps the earth alive..Thanks for your visits to my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara