Magic Star

You're the angel dust sparkling silver stars wishing away Sprinkling magic in misted gems dazzling pure trails White as the driven snow falling within a beauties vision Rising wishes blowing whispers upon a breeze silently touching Smiling golden gleams ivory candy to one's eyes colors rainbows Chocolate sleeping warm melting tender soft satin feelings Sweet velvet talking honey sunshine emotions, beam rays Golden dew of a rose drop upon sunflower petals smile Regal in light of day I pray in darkness of night you sleep well watched over by angels Held in the warm light of love

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/3/2014 7:53:00 PM

Awesome! This poem is so very beautiful Liam! One of the most well-versed ones to me that you've penned so far and I just love all yours, some more than othres of course. And for sure I feel all the true love magic of it. Just wonderful! This one as a matter of fact go to be with all the others on my very favorite Top list of all you've written and posted here at the soup. A 7 +++! Thank you for writing and posting this one.Have a very wonderful and peaceful day Liam, my dearest friend. :) Love and hugs! xoxxxox D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/5/2014 8:37:00 PM

truly outstanding comment dorian thank ever so kindly smiling heartfelt appreciated bless you dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/3/2014 4:27:00 AM

- Time flies .... many poems I have not read ..... - But, really glad I stopped by this magic poem - A truly beautiful poem .... I feel the love, safe and warm - thank my friend Liam ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/5/2014 8:34:00 PM

truly dazzling very beautiful comment anne lise still working on the christmas poem with gary heartfelt warm beautiful bless you pal have a great weekend