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Lying On A Bed Of petals

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Lying On A Bed Of petals

Lying on a bed of petals
Sweet honey dripping off her lips
Mysterious passionate eyes
Staring through my soul
Hair so flaxen fragrance of rose
Skin so silky to touch
And stroke
As lovers have 
For all time
My tree grows tall and bares fruit
Fertilized by the nectars of 
To jointly combine
As God molded mankind
Lying on a bed of petals

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  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:04:00 AM
    Nice one?

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 7:53:00 PM
    nice n hot :)

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 10:42:00 PM
    this is a gorgeous poem. If it's for the contest, she asked for no haiku or free verse, just to let you know. But in any event, you were inspired to do something very lovely.

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Enjoyed your poem , Pretty! Glad you enjoyed my Bud of Love! Thank you for the complement. Have a bright , wonderful day! If you have time I have poetry on my facebook too under Poestess Stacey Law. Nice to meet you on the soup!

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 11:08:00 PM
    I love how the first and last line come full circle.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 5:15:00 PM
    Nice poem Rick....Donna

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Gooooorgeous poem! :)

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 6:07:00 AM
    Very nice read enjoyed.