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LUST Oh lust, How many times will you Trick a man A piece of his soul to Trade, Just to delight his insatiable Appetites Without ever being able to make Them fade? © Demetrios Trifiatis 01 JULY 2013

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Date: 8/12/2013 1:56:00 PM
My lovely Demetrios it always gives me great pleasure to read your poems. They are short but profound...all the Greeks must have been well trained in this dynamic art of writing. Nice work.
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:38:00 PM
My dearest , thank you for your gracious comment and thank you for visiting!
Date: 8/7/2013 7:24:00 PM
Wow!i am truly captivated by the way you portrayed lust and the way you put this piece together.I am speechless!smiles
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:40:00 PM
It is so generous of you my dear. You seem do be a true April! Thank you!
Date: 8/6/2013 4:33:00 PM
Truthful work,..,.Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:40:00 PM
Hi Sara and thank you!
Date: 8/1/2013 9:52:00 PM
How true. I like he style in which you write. I was glad to have read some of Dan's work and in doing so stumbling upon some of your insightful work this evening. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:41:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for your beautiful comment!
Date: 7/30/2013 11:48:00 AM
Mou lipis!!!! Mr Philosopher....your words shine true, as always! Your wisdom is boundless. Ella Piso! :)
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:42:00 PM
It is mutual my friend. Thank you for your so generous and kind comments!
Date: 7/23/2013 3:41:00 AM
Hi Dimitrios, Nice message in this piece. I like this line. It is very strong..."A piece of his soul to trade" Guard your heart...people are never who they say they are.
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:43:00 PM
Hi Christina it is so good to see you! Thank you!
Date: 7/15/2013 3:59:00 PM
Such an evil indeed! Keep these words of wonder coming! :o)
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:44:00 PM
Thank you, Dan, so kind for you to visit!
Date: 7/12/2013 3:07:00 PM
there is much truth in this piece. Well expressed Dimitrios
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:44:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend!
Date: 7/8/2013 5:19:00 AM
Nice work Demetrios. - Enjoyed reading it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:45:00 PM
I am happy you liked it! Thank you!
Date: 7/5/2013 12:38:00 PM
This is well written, but some people confuse one thing with another. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Date: 7/6/2013 4:41:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 7/3/2013 11:08:00 AM
passing through to say hello, D.. thanks for your visit..:) hugggs.. hope to read you again..
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Date: 7/6/2013 4:41:00 PM
Let us hope! Thank you!
Date: 7/3/2013 5:17:00 AM
Well said Demetrious ,all kinds of lust in this world .Enjoyed this poem .Anne
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne!
Date: 7/2/2013 9:54:00 PM
Deep...like it Demetrios
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:18:00 AM
Donna, how kind of you my dear!
Date: 7/2/2013 4:58:00 AM
what a simmering piece you have woven here with much poetic appeal, D... well rendered!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/2/2013 8:48:00 AM
You so kind! Thank you Nette!
Date: 7/1/2013 9:12:00 PM
very good!!! You said it in a very unique way.
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Date: 7/2/2013 2:58:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 7/1/2013 6:21:00 AM
Wow, this is such a truthful and exact write my friend! You have masterfully put together and wonderful poem here! I really enjoyed reading this awesome piece this morning! What a terrific poem, Great Work!
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Date: 7/1/2013 7:02:00 AM
Russell, my friend, so kind and so punctual how could I thank you enough for your friendship?
Date: 7/1/2013 5:57:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Tfs
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Date: 7/1/2013 7:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ravi, for you generous comment!

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