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velvet feline paws pacing across the kitchen birds roost peacefully 08~15~15

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James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2015 1:40:00 PM

Love this short piece, love the image, would love to know what the Cat is thinking ;) James xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 5:57:00 PM

He's thinking grr dinner time lol:-) hugs jan xx

James Cottrell

Date: 8/17/2015 8:41:00 AM

Nice Haiku. I like the picture that goes with it.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2015 8:44:00 AM

Thanks James - I always write the poem first then try and see if I can find a suitable image:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman

Date: 8/16/2015 10:05:00 AM

I love your Haiku, Jan. I used to have a cat that would get so stressed out when he saw a bird through a window, he would start salivating.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2015 10:12:00 AM

Aww James poor cat but lucky bird!:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 8/16/2015 10:04:00 AM

Jan, this is so sweet, my cats love watching the birds from the window also A7 and thanks for visiting my lover of writing poem

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2015 10:08:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/16/2015 5:24:00 AM

Velvety beautiful! A seven, dear Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2015 5:25:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun

Date: 8/16/2015 2:19:00 AM

An awesome haiku this is my very dear friend, Jan. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it this afternoon here. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your precious time reading my latest poem and your kind and encouraging words. More blessings to you! Biggest Hugs! love lots, Leonora

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2015 5:03:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Leonora:-) hugs Jan xx

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/15/2015 8:15:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Jan. Happy i read this woderful haiku.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2015 5:02:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/15/2015 7:59:00 PM

Nice piece done in the 5 7 5 mode whish is all to the good. The picture reminded me of my late cat - Bilbo. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2015 5:00:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Matthew:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/15/2015 4:42:00 PM

Cute as only you can do, sweetie....Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2015 4:47:00 PM

Thanks Eileen:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/15/2015 3:59:00 PM

Enjoyed this animal haiku, Jan. Our first cat Ginger used to lie on the window sill with his tail end inside the cage while the budgie pecked at it:) They were very friendly. ~ Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2015 4:00:00 PM

Thanks Paul :-) hugs Jan xx

Anu Nayak

Date: 8/15/2015 1:51:00 PM

Dear Jan, So cute poem and pic is cute too! But cats may turn foes to little birds.....sometimes.... Well penned dear love, Anu:-):-):-)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2015 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Anu we used to have a cat many years ago she would always leave little presents on the door step - usually the remains of a little mouse:-( hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2015 1:18:00 PM

how adorable. I love the pic. MY cat looks just like this from behind!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2015 1:21:00 PM

aww how cute Andrea - hope I got the final line right:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/15/2015 1:09:00 PM

Poor cat, this must drive him nuts! Cute poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2015 1:13:00 PM

Thanks Richard - I bet the birdy is happy though! Hugs Jan xx