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A silver path shimmers Across the sea and leads To you lovely Luna lady, Clustered by Cumulus clouds And embraced by an indigo sky, Enchantment emanates From your glowing eye. Lovers wrapped in moonbeams Reflected by the sandy shore Share kisses in silhouette shadows In the magic of your rising, In the soft music of the waves, In the beating of passionate hearts. © 2014 Connie Marcum Wong

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Justin Bordner

Date: 11/11/2014 8:48:00 PM

Luna is a purveyor of passion born in the mystery of origin Connie. This poem is elemental romance par excellence! The moon does seem to facilitate ardor for life. I feel more awake at night Connie...J.A.B.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/9/2014 11:43:00 AM

so stirring and delightful Connie hugs

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/5/2014 11:45:00 PM

The magic of romance is certainly heightened beneath the silver rays of the moon.... The enchanting imagery is so lovely in this poem! Very nicely done, Connie!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/8/2014 4:37:00 PM

Guess I could publish a book of poetry with just my Luna poems alone Kelly, but she does bring out my romantic heart. Thank you so much for this lovely comment. I appreciate it very much. Thank you! hugs, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2014 3:45:00 PM

for the gorgeous imagery, this one is probably the best of yours I saw today. GREAT to see three poems of yours in one day. You rock, Connie

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/3/2014 3:59:00 PM

I am glad you like it Andrea. Thanks for commenting on all of them. Super nice of you. Blessings, Connie

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/3/2014 10:29:00 AM

the moon always cheers me up and this is picture perfect love the picture and Connie your words really do her justice. a fav for me hugs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/3/2014 1:44:00 PM

How sweet of you to fav this poem Shadow. I am a fan of your poetry and am honored. Thank you very much. Blessings, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2014 10:03:00 AM

The stars were brightly shining against a deep black backdrop early this morning..I am sure that the lunar effect could have happened to any lovers around..Great work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/3/2014 1:43:00 PM

Thank you for commenting Sara. I was up before dawn myself past several days. Hugs, Connie

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/3/2014 8:29:00 AM

truly very beautifully penned connie flowed excellent in the mind

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/3/2014 1:42:00 PM

Thank you very much Liam. I appreciate you commenting on my poem. Aloha, Connie

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/3/2014 6:20:00 AM

Wow Connie! The beauty of ur words is greater than that of the luna's ! Great work my friend!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/3/2014 1:30:00 PM

I appreciate you commenting on my poem Dr. Upma. Thank you...Blessings, Connie

Hija De La Luna

Date: 11/3/2014 4:30:00 AM

oh the amorous moon...love this beautiful write, Connie!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/3/2014 1:29:00 PM

Thank you very much. I appreciate you leaving me such a lovely comment. Blessings, Connie

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/3/2014 4:29:00 AM

Bathing in the magic light of your verse one rests spellbound, dearest Connie! A seven!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/3/2014 1:20:00 PM

Wow, thank you so much Demetrios! I appreciate your comment very much. Blessings, Connie

Sandip Goswami

Date: 11/3/2014 3:56:00 AM

I observed the real magic on the coast of Bay of Bengal...Delicious creation...I enjoyed it with my romantic vision...Thank you very much...Best wishes to you from India...

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/3/2014 1:18:00 PM

I would love to visit India, a most romantic country where poetry resides. I enjoy watching Hindi dramas/comedies. Very nice to meet you Sandip. Thank you very much for your sweet comment on my poem. Blessings and Aloha, Connie

Britt Rose

Date: 11/2/2014 9:30:00 PM

Like a dream....

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/2/2014 11:07:00 PM

Thank you Britt. I appreciate you commenting. Aloha, Connie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/2/2014 8:10:00 PM

sigh..Im carried away by this lovely poem. BG

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/2/2014 8:25:00 PM

Thank you Barbara. I was lucky to find just the right picture to go with my poem. I love twilight and when the moon is full, she enchants! hugs, Connie

David Meade

Date: 11/2/2014 8:06:00 PM

"lovely Luna lady" love that phrase. Now on my walks at night I will greet the lovely Luna lady -- growing and shrinking, marking seasons one lover at a time. I am off to greet her now! All the best my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/2/2014 8:23:00 PM

Thank you David. May she inspire some more wonderful work from you. Aloha, Connie