Lovers

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As lovers delight in each other's presence The sun peeks through the clouds to feed 'pon their love The meadow feeds on the energy of the mix of love and breaking sun Daisies spring up in their presence Drawing power to bloom and grow just from the radiance of love New love growing on the feeling of this is the one Overflowing with vivacity and strength Lovers in the coming of the sun What will happen? Will it continue and grow? Only time will tell...

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John Rhinem

Date: 4/25/2012 7:38:00 AM

Smile ˜ Good Morning Beautiful Sara ˜ You know I only watched that movie, Gone With The Wind, one time in my life but, I really loved Vivien's beautiful eyes ˜ Beautiful like your precious hearts own; Windows ˜ My love to You, John!:) ˜

John Rhinem

Date: 4/22/2012 3:13:00 PM

Smile ˜ I kept thinking of that sundress as I was reading this lovely verse, my dear sweet beautiful Sara ˜ So very beautiful it's image & these thoughts of love ˜ My Love, Always, John!:) ˜

Jack Horne

Date: 4/22/2012 8:52:00 AM

beautiful romantic write, sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/22/2012 4:06:00 AM

wonderful to read this, Sara. harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2012 9:13:00 PM

yes, only time will tell. You told it well, sweet lady!! (the captha says 4 sex. hahaha)

Date: 4/22/2012 3:15:00 PM

...Yesss baby!:)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/21/2012 3:03:00 PM

A very touching poem for lovers. Lets hope that it does continue to grow. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

David Williams

Date: 4/21/2012 1:20:00 PM

Sara I like how this poem grows with each line, have a great weekend...David

Daver Austin

Date: 4/21/2012 1:13:00 PM

Let's not hope it is merely moon love. Remember Freddy Martin? He did a tune to the slow movement of Tschaikowsky's 5th Symphony and called it Moon LOve. Like this one a lot, Sara. Love, daver

Marty Owens

Date: 4/21/2012 10:16:00 AM

Sara I enjoyed reading your poem this morning. I appreciate the nice comments on my poem....the form was created by Jared Pickett and he and Jonathan Taylor inspired me to write it Marty