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Below is the poem entitled Lover which was written by poet Mar Star. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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"I confused love with lust when I’ve been with you,
You filled the solitude I had when you came into my life,
You gave light into my life I thought I’ve lost,
You gave the dose I once lost,
You remind me of the man I once loved yet lost,
You energized my blood with passion,
I wanted you for more, disregarding you were my dose,
Your departure gave me wings to analyze my dreams,
You're a great lover, lucky the one to enchant you,
Yet I will treasure your presence,
Since you gave me back the essence I once lost, to love once more."

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  1. Date: 6/1/2012 9:23:00 AM
    This is very deep!! Loving the inner you!! Not afraid to speak what's on your mind..keep that up!

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    Date: 6/1/2012 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I learned I must express my thoughts while I'm alive.. If I wait til tomorrow I'll probably be to late.