Lovelorn

Empty mass, devoid and vast, Our parting words will be our last And, oh, my Heart- in Death to cast! For I cannot endure to relive the past If you should go, you will steal my Soul As half of me would become a hole And left, sadly, to never know How I could ever love you so... **Gothic or Romantic Contest Entry ~JustThatArchaicPoet

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/24/2013 2:19:00 PM

I know exactly how you felt when you wrote this one...A deeply emotional and very heartfelt poem, BP! I loved it! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind comments!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/24/2013 2:26:00 PM

I have nothing but mad love for you, SP; thanks for making me smile <3

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 12:43:00 PM

CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/23/2013 1:00:00 PM

Thanks, Linda! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/23/2013 8:06:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, AP

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/23/2013 1:00:00 PM

Thanks, Doc; I appreciate everyone stopping by :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2013 10:00:00 PM

nice win...PD

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/23/2013 7:00:00 AM

Much appreciated, Linda :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/22/2013 8:46:00 PM

Congrats on the win in Georgio's contest. Another superb write from your pen.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/23/2013 7:00:00 AM

<3 <3 <3 :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/22/2013 7:31:00 PM

Very romantic and heartbreaking. I have added you to my favorite poets list.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/22/2013 8:56:00 PM

I am quite flattered. The encouragement and support I have found here has been immense, overwhelming and, moreover, quite surprising. The people here are genuine and kind, and it means the world to me. When I message you, I will explain why :)