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Love Notes

The full moon hung heavily in the heaven's Reflecting on the water below The ocean waves played a melody Lulling peacefulness into the stillness of the night. A virginal vision dressed in white rides upon her white steed. Throughout the forest a fine mist, hangs Glistening, the woods in fairy like glow. The stars twinkled, in sad refrain, the ocean, lapped timelessly ,upon the shore Mimicing the beating of the heart. She gazes, over the ocean ,where, the full moon illuminates. Her crystal tears, flow. In her hand, letters, written but never sent. Love notes, that will never be read. For, he died that day Never declaring the love she felt Now all that remains Pieces of paper Written but never sent. 5/5/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/19/2012 10:51:00 PM
very awesome write Phyllis, love it ,,,, you have a blessed day ;}
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Date: 5/21/2012 8:41:00 AM
A fairy tale that has so much magic and emotion in it. Reminds me of those tales of romance I read when I was a child. Love it Phyl!
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Date: 5/9/2012 10:41:00 AM
Wow, Phyllis, this is so good, love the imagery, the flow of the whole poem blends so well. harry
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/11/2012 1:12:00 PM
thanks Harry for your comment.
Date: 5/8/2012 8:44:00 AM
Phyllis teriffic images..David
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/11/2012 1:12:00 PM
thank you David
Date: 5/6/2012 9:14:00 AM
So lovely written Phyllis, like this one alot - sweet and sad ...all in one... - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/11/2012 1:11:00 PM
thank you for your comments Anne Lise
Date: 5/5/2012 9:13:00 PM
wow, phyllis. What inspired this poignant poem from you? So glad I happened to catch the new poems by poet list tonight. Nice seeing you here!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/11/2012 1:10:00 PM
this is from a song on you tube-shows pictures and i wrote this poem
Date: 5/5/2012 9:04:00 PM
Hello, lovely Phyllis, I like the moon hanging deep in heavens way. Thank you for the exciting image. I also liked the melody the ocean waves play through my mind in your poem. It gives me a very young but longing feeling. a double wow to your illuminating flowing story. It presents a sad tone and flow. I can't help and feel a sad thought. Your poem started off very dreamy, in a deep filled with stillness epic way. This note left a very dangling feeling. :-)Enjoyed have yourself a good night~PD
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/11/2012 1:09:00 PM
thanks PD for your nice comments

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