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Love Note 2

On the other side of the world laying in the sand Guns and grenades hanging around his hip His mind flies back to the image of her riding her steed What would he have done if he could take back time Steal a piece only for a moment to declare his love Letters he wrote but never sent Love notes stacked in his drawer Never to be seen...never for her to see A regretful moment in time that he could not fix He knew he would not make it out alive He knew that his time had run out The sands of time will devour Lying on the sand his heart full of regret. For what he should have been brave enough to do Send her those love notes that came from the heart. 5/11/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/13/2012 10:21:00 AM
OH my, nobody saw this one yet. Such an emotive poem, Phyllis. Putting yourself in the shoes of a man like this. A very sad one and much enjoyed seeing it. Luv, Andrea
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