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Love Is In the Air Tonight

Skipping heartbeats in the air With the warm sun in your voice In the cozy tipsy room The pen is restless Pink desires of crimson fruits Have gone to the dense woodland To drink wine from the moon cup The box is greedy Ice on pulsating sweet heat Flames on slice of valentine Passionate warmth on your palm Restless painting brush A night for crazy casket A dark time for equine rhythm Valentine taps on the cheek It’s time to wake up We all have lyrical pens In our pink chest bouncing hues Rich or poor, flames in impulse To wake up and sleep Champagne in the stars of night Wind calling to cross the line Tonight is for thine and mine Valentine freedom __________________________________________ 15/01/2017 : "The Dodoitsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and is often about love or humor. It has 26 syllables made of of four lines of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respec-tively. It is unrhymed and non-metrical.”-PoetrySoup

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Date: 2/5/2017 10:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this romantic write! :)
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Date: 2/5/2017 10:46:00 AM
Thank you, Sunita ...
Date: 2/4/2017 10:16:00 PM
Congratulations Probir on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 2/4/2017 10:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nayda for liking and considering ...It is always a pleasure to write for your contest ...
Date: 1/16/2017 6:40:00 AM
never seen this form before cracking poem and im sure it will do well in the comp congrats stephen
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Date: 1/16/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thank you ... probir ...
Date: 1/16/2017 6:17:00 AM
This is really so beautiful...It reads like a winner... Great poetry... A 7 ..
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Date: 1/16/2017 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Supraja ... probir ...
Date: 1/16/2017 5:58:00 AM
Intoxicating string of Dodoitsu. A seven for each, dear Probir!
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Date: 1/16/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thank you ... probir ...
Date: 1/15/2017 10:28:00 PM
love the poem and all the descriptions you have applied to each stanza... If for contest it's a winner already Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/15/2017 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, Eve for loving the poem that I wrote really fondly ....Probir ...
Date: 1/15/2017 12:31:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Probir - (Singing in Japanese certainly great :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/15/2017 10:36:00 PM
Thank you, Anne ... probir
Date: 1/15/2017 10:28:00 AM
I love the references to the "pen" I really love this lyrical poem, Probir:)
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Date: 1/15/2017 11:35:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel ... probir

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