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Love In Dark Woods

Grape vine held out her soft hands Red pine bow down then hold hands Will they care not my shy look? Love in dark woods that thrive lands. Honorable Mention in STRAND CHOICE K,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/25/2020 12:53:00 AM

Awesome, Jenish. Janice

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/25/2020 1:02:00 AM

Thank you Janice..

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/22/2020 5:44:00 PM

Lovely, romantic piece with beautiful imagery - enjoyed the read! Best regards. Pandita

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/25/2020 12:21:00 AM

Thank you Pandita for your kind words..

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/22/2020 2:17:00 AM

Love where you go with this gem of poetry..

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/25/2020 12:20:00 AM

Thank you Harry for that delightful comment..

Eve Roper

Date: 3/22/2020 12:46:00 AM

What a great way to describe the growth of a climbing vine. Should place very high in the contest, if for the contest.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/25/2020 12:19:00 AM

It is not for the contest Eve.. In fact the Jueju contest is mine.. Thank you for your kind words..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/21/2020 6:54:00 PM

Some pretty images, Jenish!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/25/2020 12:18:00 AM

Thank you Kim..

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/20/2020 12:27:00 AM

Fragile love - so tender. Congratulations Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/25/2020 12:17:00 AM

Thank you Sam...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/19/2020 8:57:00 PM

Delicate and pretty.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/20/2020 12:22:00 AM

Thank you Caren..

Ann Foster

Date: 3/19/2020 7:06:00 PM

I felt very far away... like in the forest where the spider dwell and the hobbit tries to get passed. To fun. Great write. Ann

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/20/2020 12:22:00 AM

Thank you Ann.. Forests are safer at present..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/19/2020 6:53:00 AM

Fantastic imagery dearest, Jenish! So realistically depicted! Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/19/2020 11:48:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your support..