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Love Birds

Fragrant jasmine spins a winsome spell in twilight ~ Two nightingales swathed in pale light, share tales of love... ~ Then tuck their wings, before singing moon's spring duet
____________________________________ In honor of Nette's contest: Than Bauk a Twilight By Carrie Richards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/25/2012 4:48:00 PM
Smile ~ Carrie, Beautiful Carrie, I Love You Baby ~ Tweet Tweet, Tweet Tweet Tweet Tweet * My Love, Always, John!:) ~
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Date: 4/20/2012 12:33:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this awesome piece. love phyl
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Date: 4/19/2012 4:33:00 PM
Great work..Enjoyed reading your winning entry..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 4/19/2012 3:56:00 PM
Springs in the air! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2012 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2012 11:24:00 AM
Relly nice Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2012 4:06:00 AM
Wonderful imagery here Carrie.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:20:00 PM
I love when this type of poem is done with great cohesion and not a lot of them are so well crafted as this one. I love it.
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Date: 4/16/2012 2:28:00 PM
A lovely use of the form, Carrie! I love your beautiful lines. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/16/2012 10:34:00 AM
nice use of the senses to create this lovely piece - starting it with scent really sets the scene :)
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Date: 4/16/2012 2:53:00 AM
Really beautiful Carrie doubtful it gets much better than this, best of luck with this winner
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