Love

Love is such a beautiful thing It just makes your heart sing It causes you to see beauty in the midst of so much ugliness It causes your whole being to come alive Your heart is soaring so high But when you're no longer able to fly and you start to fall or crash It my friend is the worst feeling ever 11-26-16 Alexis Y.

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Bobby May

Date: 12/22/2018 9:00:00 PM

I will never let you fall!

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/22/2018 9:05:00 PM

That was such a sweet comment. I appreciate your continued support my friend:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/2/2016 9:08:00 AM

I rather have the high all the time :-) today is one of my downs :-( very good,Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/2/2016 11:09:00 AM

Hi Eve, It saddens me to hear that you're feeling down today. I hope you feel better soon. I'm sending a :-) and big cyber hug your way -Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 11/28/2016 7:11:00 AM

Love is such an amazing high that when it goes away the fall hurts worse than anything else. Beautifully written my friend. Your words have touched a nerve this morning as I know both of these feelings so well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2016 3:56:00 PM

oh the ins and outs of love, Alexis. You got it!! I sure enjoyed this one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2016 3:56:00 PM

oh the ins and outs of love, Alexis. You got it!! I sure enjoyed this one.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/27/2016 10:57:00 AM

Love is the essence of God dear, Alexis and you seem to have captured that essence! Beautiful!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/26/2016 6:44:00 AM

Great truthful poem, Alexis. You got it spot-on about that ... soaring so high ...start to fall or crash ... part right. That's how love can make you feel. This is a keeper on the strength of the truth spoken in this short poem. Top notch 7+. Going in the faves, my dear. Love the poem though. Love and joy to you.