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Love

quickened heart body, mind and soul combine. . . breathless bliss

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Mel Merrill

Date: 4/23/2014 12:38:00 AM

Hi Connie. Sweet poem about such an awesome theme. You summed it up. Kudos. Mel :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2014 4:36:00 AM

I love this one Connie, not just cos it's so good, but it also reminds me of my short poem "She holds her breath". /x/ paul

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/2/2014 8:57:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem Connie. Yes it has been a while and like you i am busy with my two year old grandson and 4 year old grandson. They both keep me very busy and I have not had much time for writing this past while. I had a bad year with flues last year and it took a lot out of me too. I feel very uninspired at the moment and nothing sounds good when I write. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2014 4:25:00 PM

Hi, connie, thanks again for seeing so many of my poems lately. Sure wish to see more of yours over here!!

Roy Jerden

Date: 1/30/2014 2:06:00 PM

Good one Connie. Reminds me of an SF novel I read once in which there was a drug called "Merge" which taken by two people, did exactly what your poem describes, temporarily of course. Congratulations! Cheers, Roy

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/25/2014 9:55:00 AM

Who could not feel the heart beat faster with this one??!! congrats!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/25/2014 8:14:00 AM

Feelings that don't come very often...congrats on your win. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2014 7:53:00 AM

- Connie - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in: Nothing But Love Contest - Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/24/2014 8:10:00 PM

Congratulations on the fine win in the contest, Nothing But Love, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2014 7:57:00 PM

that last line is so beautiful, Connie. Glad to see this one is yours on my winner list!! Congrats for your win with this passionate senryu.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/19/2014 6:00:00 AM

Loved the alliteration in that last line, Connie...Seems like a beautiful experience depicted here. Thanks for sharing this! Breathless BLISS...Yes, that's wonderful and conjures up all sorts of lovely possibilities!