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Love is true love that lures you, not you alluring it Don’t try to find love, let love find you to hook. First sight love forces you not to fall, you just fall, First sight love is potent but have a second look. Love is like butterflies who’re not as civilized as men Who needs half happiness and twice the longevity. Have a look at butterflies flirting happily around sane, Settling down nowhere but full of joy and not longevity. Love is silent, language or tongue hasn’t power To speak what love incites by a kiss, a glance An eye, or a sound, a touch, a smile or a flower Even the tears, the messengers of grief and trance More eloquent than a hundred words to compare. Love is more than a common noun to suffice It’s a verb to care, share, help, suffer, and sacrifice A woman in travail has sorrow till her hour is come As she delivers, pain gone; Oh, the love of a mom.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date: 31-12-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Fifth Place Win Contest: Three or more stanzas by Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 3/17/2014 9:59:00 AM
great use of analogies and imagery here - great poem! kirbykirb~
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Date: 1/18/2014 3:01:00 PM
Good contrast in the way we see love, Dr. Ram Mehta. Good emotion and use of form too. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest.
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Date: 1/10/2014 1:35:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one.. Sameh
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Date: 1/8/2014 7:17:00 AM
Hi Dr. Ram Mehta, your poem was penned beautifully on the subject of love. Enjoyed it! Thanks for the congrats!
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Date: 1/6/2014 12:13:00 PM
thanks for comment and I really enjoyed this poem Love an all round winner
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Date: 1/4/2014 8:46:00 AM
Very Nice poem , great job
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Date: 1/3/2014 10:19:00 AM
Eloquent poem describing love. Last stanza is beautiful. Best wishes, Linda x
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Date: 1/1/2014 4:32:00 PM
very nicely done, taking all those ways to look at love. I see high marks in your future for this one!!
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Date: 1/1/2014 1:31:00 PM
lovely write, Dr Ram
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Date: 1/1/2014 10:54:00 AM
Very wise and insightful poem Doctor Ram. Good advice to the young as well as the old. Love is so powerful..
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Date: 1/1/2014 10:17:00 AM
Strong write with lots of lessons that can be derived. Loved your poem Dr. Ram and best wishes for the new year.
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Date: 1/1/2014 9:21:00 AM
from the book "The Prophet" " If love finds you worthy, it will find you"
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Date: 1/1/2014 3:18:00 AM
You have filled this write with most powerful descriptions Dr Ram, also thank you for the congratulations..
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