Love

love wears a noose _balancing delicately on an old broken chair

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Kat Crane

Date: 4/17/2009 12:08:00 PM

I may need to borrow your chair, mine's also broken

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/16/2009 10:52:00 PM

A masterful, powerful verse indeed!

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/12/2009 11:54:00 PM

Wow, this is deep..Congratulations on having this awesome piece being featured this week..GB Tyesha

Fathima Dawood

Date: 3/12/2009 4:57:00 AM

Well said Brian!!! Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week!! Peace Fathima

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/11/2009 2:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Brian. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/11/2009 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations Brian on the featuring of "Love" on Poetry Soup this week. Vince

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 3/10/2009 3:18:00 PM

such words of truth you speak...enjoyed this short piece.congrats on its feature..MJ*

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 3/10/2009 11:42:00 AM

Great visual here! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy ~

Daver Austin

Date: 3/10/2009 10:25:00 AM

Congrats on this selection...a very lucid observation. Love, daver

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/9/2009 7:35:00 PM

Brian, this is a great one..it speaks to me. Congrats om being featured. I'm going to read all your work..dont know how I missed this. BG

Date: 3/9/2009 5:48:00 PM

Interesting images carry your thoughts in a creative way. Much said in just three lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

John Heck

Date: 3/9/2009 11:05:00 AM

Brian - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John

Corinne Curcio

Date: 3/9/2009 9:19:00 AM

Your short poem really caught my attention and I find it thought provoking indeed. Congrats on being featured

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/9/2009 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/8/2009 9:49:00 PM

Brian - I reckon so - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/5/2009 10:54:00 AM

Oh Brian this is so shocking and disturbing. Very thought provoking.