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Lost within my presence

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Lost within my presence

Lost within my presence

Such energy
From this sweet garden flows
So many different shades of green
In me, such love, it glows
But not the ego kind of love
The love that’s always here
That nature brings on into one
When mind is pure, and clear

It comes from the suns soft glow
As it shines down on the little pond
And sweet reflections grow
The fish are swimming round, and round
In a kind of magic dance
As yellow water lily shines
It’s beauty to my glance.

As blow vacuum
Gives out a sucking sound
Becomes one with the morning magic
Such harmony is found
Within this early morning softness
That comes from nature’s essence
As I sit here by this magic pond
All lost within my presence.

26 Novem

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  1. Date: 12/2/2013 1:51:00 PM
    This is beautiful Peter; was this yours or Vera's?

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/3/2013 8:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's wonderful to have that support Peter! But it truly is beautiful :)
    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 12/2/2013 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you my friend. It's mine, Vera doesn't write, she just likes to support me That's why she's on the site. I appreciate your comments F.J...peter
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 5:06:00 PM
    Nice one, my poetic friend. Your imagery is so superb as to have me right there at the pond with you. PS - you need to lose one "r" in "presence". An entertaining write, Peter. Licia :-)

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 11/29/2013 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lysia, so nice of you to give such beautiful comments. And thanks for pointing out my mistake....peter