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Humble heart naked like a winter tree, yearns for seasons to remain evergreen. Furtive eyes have disturbed this reverie, soul stands still like nonchalant figurine. Walking away to leave one heartbroken, her shallow soul left no apology. Regret kills the tongue from words unspoken, lost are lyrics from our anthology. Wounds so deep, nerves drown in crimson fluid, tears bleed sorrows lost to words poetic. Ink seeks metaphors to show whats ruined, so the heart feels peace like an ascetic. In the midst of pain, veiled scars do not fade, constant reminder of all mistakes made.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/28/2018 2:46:00 PM

imbued with such depth of painful, lovely reveries of love, S.O... amazing sonnet.. huggs

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/23/2018 4:13:00 PM

A TOP CLASS SONNET ALL THE WAY MY FRIEND. Yes, such scars stay with us and sometimes even serve to better us in the future if we learn from our mistakes. A fav...

Silent One
Date: 1/24/2018 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Robert..

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/22/2018 9:19:00 PM

A beautiful sonnet with much truth in it; especially in the last stanza! Another awesome write Silent One!~Che :)

Silent One
Date: 1/24/2018 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Che...

Maria Williams

Date: 1/21/2018 12:37:00 AM

Wow, I cant believe that I did not comment on this, or did my comment disappear into Cyber? A wonderful sonnet nonetheless Si, amazing as always....Maria

Silent One
Date: 1/22/2018 2:30:00 PM

Thank you Marie..

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 1/19/2018 10:36:00 AM

Fantastic write, profound lovely sonnet. WRITE ON!!! James

Silent One
Date: 1/20/2018 10:55:00 AM

Thanks James..

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/19/2018 12:24:00 AM

WONDERFUL. Marvelous creation of a Truly Talented Poet. Blessing

Silent One
Date: 1/20/2018 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Anisha..

James Swartz

Date: 1/18/2018 4:28:00 PM

Another moving masterpiece. You can take any word or thought and spin into your own stylistically sensational sentence.

Silent One
Date: 1/20/2018 10:55:00 AM

Thank you James..

Elaine George

Date: 1/18/2018 8:57:00 AM

Stunning!

Silent One
Date: 1/20/2018 10:57:00 AM

Thanks..

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 1/18/2018 3:34:00 AM

Emotive and graceful. I love this! : )

Silent One
Date: 1/20/2018 10:57:00 AM

Thanks..

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/17/2018 4:06:00 PM

Such a soul stirring sonnet Silent One. A moving and emotional write, I feel the beautiful melancholy expressed and a potent final couplet too - and 'Love Hurts' one of my favorite songs when I was a freshman in high school many many years ago.. thanks for bringing that classic back.. A wonderfully written sonnet my friend ~Susan

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Susan, I was not born when the song was released.. but is a great song..

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/17/2018 3:21:00 PM

Beautiful, emotive and potent poetic pen, Silent...and handily using all words and criteria required with such ease! Your skills really shine in this stellar poem! GL in the contest :)

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 3:24:00 PM

Thank you Laura, will not be entering the contest, just wanted to give it a go..

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/17/2018 1:40:00 PM

lost are minds that do not work....soft are the eyes that do flirt....strong is the heart that wont give up....long is the way the confident do strut....cries haunt the one whose first response is violence....wise is the one who freely chooses silence....my brother, i am glad to see you still holding it down for the soup....great work here....

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 3:55:00 PM

Thank you.. Nice to see you back..

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/17/2018 12:11:00 PM

Wonderfully penned sonnet, a very moving piece Silent One. So sad.

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:37:00 PM

Thank you Mo..

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/17/2018 10:20:00 AM

Beautifully sad, Silent One. I have felt this way. Love the ink seeks metaphors.... Happy Wednesday

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Mike..

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/17/2018 9:45:00 AM

Very well written Silent One. I can feel it :)

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:43:00 PM

Thank you Heidi..

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/17/2018 9:26:00 AM

a soulful poem dear poet and a well-written sonnet...good luck in the contest

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Frederic, not for contest my friend..

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/17/2018 8:42:00 AM

Never heard much of Nazareth after "Love Hurts" ... But an everlasting song indeed...May try to write a love lost poem, although I haven't lost any...

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:30:00 PM

Thank you Arturo... Its a great song..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/17/2018 7:49:00 AM

Introspective poem submersing into the depths of the heart where one discovers pasts errors and griefs! Artfully done dear, S.O,

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios..

Becca Teagan

Date: 1/17/2018 7:39:00 AM

wow, you did it! this is really good! Especially that powerful final couplet. Well done, Silent.

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thank you Becca..

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/17/2018 7:18:00 AM

love the heart your pen writes with.

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Harry..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/17/2018 7:13:00 AM

Lovely my friend..a perfect score for you, Silent One...though this is not for the contest.

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:20:00 PM

Thank you Vijay, will leave the contests to you my friend..

John Gondolf

Date: 1/17/2018 7:01:00 AM

A great sonnet, SO, I could feel the pain. Best of luck. John

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:17:00 PM

Thank you John, but It is not for the contest, just inspired by it..

Judith S

Date: 1/17/2018 6:50:00 AM

You never cease to amaze with your writing dear Silent One! You’re an amazing artist of words and emotion. This is just so beautifully sad and I FEEL as I read. You’ve set a very high bar indeed for this contest.

Silent One
Date: 1/17/2018 4:15:00 PM

Thank you Judy, I am sure there will be many so much better than this one...