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Lost in you

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Lost in you

I was thinking of you, while thinking even didn't realize, when i lost in the depth of thoughts. The thoughts took me into notions, where i felt you are around laughing, giggling, smiling and teasing me. In the lost world, Suddenly the dark thunder storm arrived on sky, which was horribly noised and lightened make you scared. You forget everything  and run into my arms.
I hold you gently, felt like you were in real beside me and i can feel the sound of your breath, the fear of your body and confidence to be comfortable in my arms. I forget the storm for the moment to have you in my arms, but realize when you bent down little, tickled me and teased by ran away saying caught me if you can. To not having you in my arms, I felt for a moment, like i am not myself  besides to see you running far from me make me sad for a while.
 I simultaneously said stop and start running behind you to chase you, it’s drizzling around, with your wet hairs you turn again n again with a beautiful smile to see how close am i to you. Then to run a while, i stopped and start staring stunned at you. You turn back saying com'on caught me if you can, i then give you smile in return. You looked at me with wonder, like your questioning yourself why I am not chasing you? I make sad face turned my eyes down with open arms, you wait for a while and then run towards me like you want to travel a mile stone in a tick, so that make you in my arms again to make me smile and happy again.
I hide alot the tears in the rain but you have read it widely and deeply. I still try not to let you know. I hold you, lift you in my arms and swing roundly in rain saying I can’t live without you. Then put you down, hug you closely but softly and whisper in your ear i love you so much!
I love you so so so so much madly

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  1. Date: 1/15/2014 2:44:00 PM
    I can feel the passion and longing in this piece of work. Beautiful. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 2:23:00 AM
    Tnks for stopping by to read my poem..I' m glad I found my way here cause this is a beautiful post I would not want to miss-Charma

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 12:30:00 AM
    Hi my friend Ahsan.. thank you for visit... and here i found you with a great wonderful poem.. thank you for sharing.. enjoyed much your great penned,,, :) Sk

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 3:04:00 AM
    Like Yasmin, I wondered where you went, guess it's not important as long as your back writing these jewels Ahsan, you remind me of a sparrow bringing a tender worm to his baby bird, sweet sweet sweet go on write more Mr. Romance, you put the T in tenderness and the C in class, welcome back, xxx Your Rose xxx

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 8:17:00 AM
    Ahsan dear you are a romantic guy. Enjoyed reading your poem. There is so much in you. I like to see more of your poems. enjoy your life!

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 3:58:00 AM
    - Melt in your beautiful and romantic poem .... love it!! - Have a nice day .... continue with your beautiful thoughts. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 3:39:00 AM
    ..............Enjoyed stopping by reading this amazing and stunning write of yours !! .......Saanvi :))

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:39:00 AM
    Ahsan, this s lovely....Seren

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:08:00 AM
    Ahhh!! Passionate work..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for the visit..Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:59:00 AM
    How sweet and romantic! I envisioned it all in my head....lovely write