Lost Battle

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LOST BATTLE

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

Fighting against the desires of one's heart is a lost battle for what it craves for, it gets! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 28 September 2016

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Anu Nayak

Date: 9/28/2016 12:11:00 PM

Wow! thought provoking,a 7!! I love reading your nuggets....well...Dear Wise Man Demetrios, is it that the desires come true because of our subconscious mind or the conspiracy of the Universe? ,Love, Anu:)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2016 2:27:00 PM

Haha! As my "wisdom" is in line I have to be very careful so as to give you my dearest, Anulaxmi, an answer to your question! Well, since you talk about "Conspiracy of the Universe" and " Our Subconscious" my answer will be a question: "Don't you know that our subconscious is a double agent, an undercover agent of the Universe that does whatever its boss tell it to do?" My dearest, there is a single objective in the universe which is that all its parts coordinate their efforts so as to bring the eschatological plan to its completion for the benefit of the cosmos!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/28/2016 8:52:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, This is a well written thought provoking piece:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2016 2:29:00 PM

So nice to see you my dear, Alexis! Thank you so much for your visit and comment!

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/28/2016 6:06:00 AM

Profound and interesting ... However, at the moment my intense desire faces in vain toward your vibrant hibiscus ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2016 7:53:00 AM

Well, I do whatever I can to share my flowers with you and the rest of my friends dear, Probir! If I could send you a flower each day, I would! Thank you for your noble comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/28/2016 5:26:00 AM

- Wishes and dreams, we will always live for .... but, some desires are hard to reach - A moving thought, great written my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2016 5:45:00 AM

Yes, my dear Anne-Lise this is true but what the heart really desires will get it no matter what! Thank you so much my friend! Thank you so much for taking the time to visit and comment!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/28/2016 3:26:00 AM

Interesting to ponder.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2016 7:51:00 AM

I think so my friend, Richard! Thank you so much!